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Array ( [sid] => 73354 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Am I Dreaming? [time] => 2004-11-27 18:33:42 [hometext] => Sometimes dreams can become reality, I hope so! [bodytext] => As I lay down dreamily
Your voice it speaks to me
Of fantasies I’ve held on to
And the things you’ll do to me

You whisper oh so quietly
Then wrap me in your arms
You love and want me badly
I’m falling for your charms

I shiver with excitement
My thoughts to be revealed
My head is in a distant land
Your heartbeat I can feel

Your hands caress my body
They make me feel on fire
Kissing, stroking and teasing
Fulfilling my desire

I really have struck lucky
Where on earth did you come from?
I wake to find myself crying
I was dreaming all along
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Am I Dreaming?

Contributed by AliB on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 06:33:42 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

As I lay down dreamily
Your voice it speaks to me
Of fantasies I’ve held on to
And the things you’ll do to me

You whisper oh so quietly
Then wrap me in your arms
You love and want me badly
I’m falling for your charms

I shiver with excitement
My thoughts to be revealed
My head is in a distant land
Your heartbeat I can feel

Your hands caress my body
They make me feel on fire
Kissing, stroking and teasing
Fulfilling my desire

I really have struck lucky
Where on earth did you come from?
I wake to find myself crying
I was dreaming all along

Copyright Â© AliB ... [ 2004-11-27 18:33:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Am I Dreaming? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 06:39:56 PM AEST
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Wow! i'd love to be in one of your dreams!
bloody hell my legs have gone wobbly!

Johnny.

Re: Am I Dreaming? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:08:10 PM AEST
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this is great ali, passionate and classy:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Am I Dreaming? (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:00:55 AM AEST
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fantastic write...very very cool..

Re: Am I Dreaming? (User Rating: 1 )
by dtborchert on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 07:34:59 AM AEST
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Absolutely Fantastic write. Really wonderful.

Keep up the good work!
Tena

Re: Am I Dreaming? (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 02:50:02 AM AEST
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Very passionate and erotic, and such a sad ending. This is a well written and emotional poem, really liked it

Love Dawny xxx

Re: Am I Dreaming? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:59:39 AM AEST
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Ahh, the despair of waking -
nice write - full of your passion.

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