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Am I Dreaming?
Contributed by
AliB
on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 06:33:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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As I lay down dreamily
Your voice it speaks to me
Of fantasies Ive held on to
And the things youll do to me
You whisper oh so quietly
Then wrap me in your arms
You love and want me badly
Im falling for your charms
I shiver with excitement
My thoughts to be revealed
My head is in a distant land
Your heartbeat I can feel
Your hands caress my body
They make me feel on fire
Kissing, stroking and teasing
Fulfilling my desire
I really have struck lucky
Where on earth did you come from?
I wake to find myself crying
I was dreaming all along
Copyright ©
AliB
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2004-11-27 18:33:42]
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Re: Am I Dreaming?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 06:39:56 PM AEST
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Wow! i'd love to be in one of your dreams!
bloody hell my legs have gone wobbly!
Johnny. |
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Re: Am I Dreaming?
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:08:10 PM AEST
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this is great ali, passionate and classy:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Am I Dreaming?
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:00:55 AM AEST
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| fantastic write...very very cool.. |
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Re: Am I Dreaming?
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by dtborchert on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 07:34:59 AM AEST
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Absolutely Fantastic write. Really wonderful.
Keep up the good work!
Tena |
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Re: Am I Dreaming?
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by Dawny on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 02:50:02 AM AEST
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Very passionate and erotic, and such a sad ending. This is a well written and emotional poem, really liked it
Love Dawny xxx |
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Re: Am I Dreaming?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:59:39 AM AEST
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Ahh, the despair of waking -
nice write - full of your passion. |
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