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What would you do if you only knew?
All of these thoughts end right back at you.
I feel like I'm all alone.
You wouldn't understand because nobody understands.
You say no you just can't go.
You have a feeling that something will be wrong.
Something is wrong. I'm dying, crying.
Screaming for someone's help.
Someone please come take me away.
Something isn't right, I can feel it inside.
This has gone on for so long now,
I realize I need someone to rely on.
That someone must be gone.
Holding hands we'll fall,
together doesn't make since at all.
Where's my happy ending,
My heart is now drifting.
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All these Thoughts

Contributed by flash_16 on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 10:35:38 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I can't find a way to descrbe it.
What would you do if you only knew?
All of these thoughts end right back at you.
I feel like I'm all alone.
You wouldn't understand because nobody understands.
You say no you just can't go.
You have a feeling that something will be wrong.
Something is wrong. I'm dying, crying.
Screaming for someone's help.
Someone please come take me away.
Something isn't right, I can feel it inside.
This has gone on for so long now,
I realize I need someone to rely on.
That someone must be gone.
Holding hands we'll fall,
together doesn't make since at all.
Where's my happy ending,
My heart is now drifting.
All these thoughts end right back at you.

Copyright © flash_16 ... [ 2004-11-27 22:35:38]
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Re: All these Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 10:50:16 PM AEST
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sounds strangely like avril lavignes under my skin cd... excellent write. but you dont need someone to understand you. is there really a point in it, if we understand ourselves?

Re: All these Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:23:55 AM AEST
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I can relate to this poem very well, sometimes parents just don't understand you....well it was very well expressed and an excellent write...keep posting

Re: All these Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by taryn on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:16:10 PM AEST
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great write. easy to relate to ;). keep posting.

Re: All these Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:19:26 PM AEST
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Parents dont understand..well wah..Jesus christ grow up..Life is not fair nor will it be..Try making a living rasing a kid and being an adult then write about it.

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