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Array ( [sid] => 73412 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my little star [time] => 2004-11-28 03:01:09 [hometext] => my twist on twinkle twinkle little star, hope i do it justice [bodytext] =>

twinkle twinkle little star...
how i wonder what you are
someware above my abyss
shineing light in my unhappyness

above my shattered world so high
like a dimond in the sky
guide me through my frears
be the hope that stops my tears

twinkle twinkle little star...
when my light is gone so far
your my one to shine so bright
and lead me through this pich black night

As i travele in the dark
i thank you for your tiny spark;
for i could not see which way to go,
If you did not twinkle so.

twinkle twinkle little star
how i wonder what you are...
up above the world so high
my guardian angel in the sky [comments] => 5 [counter] => 647 [topic] => 5 [informant] => socialmisfit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => ChildrensPoetry )

my little star

Contributed by socialmisfit on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:01:09 AM in AEST
Topic: ChildrensPoetry

twinkle twinkle little star...
how i wonder what you are
someware above my abyss
shineing light in my unhappyness

above my shattered world so high
like a dimond in the sky
guide me through my frears
be the hope that stops my tears

twinkle twinkle little star...
when my light is gone so far
your my one to shine so bright
and lead me through this pich black night

As i travele in the dark
i thank you for your tiny spark;
for i could not see which way to go,
If you did not twinkle so.

twinkle twinkle little star
how i wonder what you are...
up above the world so high
my guardian angel in the sky

Copyright © socialmisfit ... [ 2004-11-28 03:01:09]
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Re: my little star (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:04:32 AM AEST
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hey, good job! i like it.

Re: my little star (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:35:51 AM AEST
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That was really good! Flowed well, I've got the tune in my head now, lmao.

Ali xx

Re: my little star (User Rating: 1 )
by Catalina on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:39:27 AM AEST
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Wow, I enjoyed this write. I love the perception of it all.
~Catalina~

Re: my little star (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 11:05:32 AM AEST
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great

Re: my little star (User Rating: 1 )
by o0meg0o on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 12:43:47 AM AEST
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i loved your poem...it's really creative and flows well..dont stop writing because you're very talented!

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