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Array ( [sid] => 73455 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lucid Creatures [time] => 2004-11-28 12:56:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I would dare say love is exactly
five minutes into “The Rain Song”,
Or when the world works
the way you want it to

I would venture to say that love
is something that can’t be found,
only shown,
or that love will give itself to you
on the least sensible of days

I could even postulate that love is
some floating debris on the ocean,
a speck of life where we thought
there was none,
and we are but a lonely jellyfish

For what else on this earth finds
its needs without a brain,
and with but the ocean currents
leading it in the right direction? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 538 [topic] => 21 [informant] => TheSchroedmeister [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Lucid Creatures

Contributed by TheSchroedmeister on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:56:49 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I would dare say love is exactly
five minutes into “The Rain Song”,
Or when the world works
the way you want it to

I would venture to say that love
is something that can’t be found,
only shown,
or that love will give itself to you
on the least sensible of days

I could even postulate that love is
some floating debris on the ocean,
a speck of life where we thought
there was none,
and we are but a lonely jellyfish

For what else on this earth finds
its needs without a brain,
and with but the ocean currents
leading it in the right direction?

Copyright Â© TheSchroedmeister ... [ 2004-11-28 12:56:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lucid Creatures (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:57:55 PM AEST
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very different, well put together,.

pixie xx

Re: Lucid Creatures (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 04:08:38 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, i really love it:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Lucid Creatures (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 03:58:10 PM AEST
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There are so many kinds of love. Sadly, the most fickle and tempestuous kind (romantic love) gets all the attention. It's undeserving, of course, but it is the one we poets seem to dwell on. Interesting write. Certainly gave me pause to think.
Stitch

Re: Lucid Creatures (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 02:41:57 AM AEST
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"I've felt the coldness of my winter -
I never thought that it would ever go . . . "

The Rain Song happens to be my favourite Led Zep track. I can play it (well, half of it, having only a single-neck Les Paul) and its stirring.

Just like this poem.

Truly well done.

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