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Array ( [sid] => 73479 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Repair my broken wings [time] => 2004-11-28 17:51:31 [hometext] => its a mixture of whats happen since i last posted a poem [bodytext] => Black crimson shattered feathers,
Pinned to your tainted body,
Blood outlining my features,
Bruised grey eyes return yours.

Clotted holes of soulless memories,
Falling from my tortured hate,
Forms of white fresh wings,
Ripped by the constant doubt.

Emptied rusted veins rim,
Dried all around my footles prints,
Unknowingly reaching the edge of nightmares,
Genuine blue eyes are all that care.

Smartly deceptive manipulating words,
Cut threw the pure silk on my back,
Purple stems create imaginary images,
Held up by pins dug into my neck.

Shortly relieving painful bliss,
Black and white evenly bled,
Ignorant actions make me notice,
Only you can repair my broken wings.
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Repair my broken wings

Contributed by Ryoko on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:51:31 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Black crimson shattered feathers,
Pinned to your tainted body,
Blood outlining my features,
Bruised grey eyes return yours.

Clotted holes of soulless memories,
Falling from my tortured hate,
Forms of white fresh wings,
Ripped by the constant doubt.

Emptied rusted veins rim,
Dried all around my footles prints,
Unknowingly reaching the edge of nightmares,
Genuine blue eyes are all that care.

Smartly deceptive manipulating words,
Cut threw the pure silk on my back,
Purple stems create imaginary images,
Held up by pins dug into my neck.

Shortly relieving painful bliss,
Black and white evenly bled,
Ignorant actions make me notice,
Only you can repair my broken wings.

Copyright © Ryoko ... [ 2004-11-28 17:51:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Repair my broken wings (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:56:03 PM AEST
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Wow.

Re: Repair my broken wings (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:39:35 PM AEST
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emotions running wild through this poem you did a great job Im sorry for all your pain though
Michelle

Re: Repair my broken wings (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:41:52 PM AEST
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wow....this is absolutely brilliant.....i loved it

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: Repair my broken wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:51:05 PM AEST
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fantastic write.

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