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As we dance within the moonlight
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:27:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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No words are to be spoken,
While I can lose myself in your eyes,
And our steps are taken silently,
Underneath a sky of fairy lights.
And our lips utter no words,
For a single word could break the spell,
That has decended upon us,
And enclosed us in its protective shell...
And the winds will serenade us,
Beneath the stars ethereal gleam,
As we dance in our own fairy grotto,
Inside our own private dream,
Where no words are needed,
For your eyes say all there is to say.
Underneath the moon up high,
And the real world shall fall away...
And in our ballroom of memories,
Where our memories are to be made,
We'll slowly dance the night away,
And there'll be no more reason to be afraid.
And as we dance upon our dancefloor,
Of concrete turned to glass,
Our feet will play a music,
So if this moment should ever pass,
I will remember those moments we danced...
And as we dance within the moonlight...
I wish the dream would never end,
I'm standing at the backdoor to heaven
And this is the best it is going to get...
Until tomorrow.
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lostinmyself
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2004-11-29 11:27:32]
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Re: As we dance within the moonlight
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by pixie on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:29:22 AM AEST
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so very beautiful Phil *hugs* moonlight is so lovely and romantic.. this poem defenatly shone in the moonlight :)
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Re: As we dance within the moonlight
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by Stitch on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:57:18 AM AEST
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This is the kind of poem that takes the reader into in and swallows her whole, and she doesn't care because she never wants to leave. BRAVO, my friend. Very, very impressive.
Oh, one typo. I think you mean stars and not "starts," but this is fantastic!!!!!
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Re: As we dance within the moonlight
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:46:15 PM AEST
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awww Phil
Another stunning write from you.
"enchanting" is a very good word here. You create and hold a very special moment in this piece. |
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Re: As we dance within the moonlight
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:17:26 PM AEST
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enchantingly sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: As we dance within the moonlight
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:49:48 AM AEST
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Awww phil that is so beautiful and enchanting.sooo romantic.I love this .
I am going to save this if you don't mind.
hugs
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Re: As we dance within the moonlight
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:33:25 AM AEST
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" No words are to be spoken..."
So I shall simply sit and bask in the splendor of your written words ... as eyes take in their beauty time and again.
*****
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: As we dance within the moonlight
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:34:35 AM AEST
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No words are to be spoken,
While I can lose myself in your eyes
Vavoom - what a great open - Nice job.
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Re: As we dance within the moonlight
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 03:35:49 AM AEST
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A beautifull, captavating, enchanting, awesome write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: As we dance within the moonlight
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:07:01 PM AEST
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| this was a very impressive piece, phil. a piece that shows your skill and talent as a writer. many writers can only hope to be as good as this. |
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