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Array ( [sid] => 7360 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Our Future [time] => 2002-11-24 06:00:00 [hometext] => This one is about how I see the future with the man I love. [bodytext] => In our future, I can see,
just the way things could be.
In our future, I will be your wife,
for you I'll make a good life.
In our future, your babies I will bear,
of those babies I'll take good care.
In our future, together we will be,
we will have a wonderful life can't you see?
In our future, we will share a love so great,
that nothing could ever break it, not even fate.
In our future, we will love with all our heart,
even after death has sent us apart.
In our future, together we will be,
together always and forever you and me.
In our future, we will have a good life,
with you as my husband and me your wife.
In our future, you are a husband and father,
and I am a wife and mother.
In our future, I can see,
just the way things could be. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ShadowsCloud [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Our Future

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

In our future, I can see,
just the way things could be.
In our future, I will be your wife,
for you I'll make a good life.
In our future, your babies I will bear,
of those babies I'll take good care.
In our future, together we will be,
we will have a wonderful life can't you see?
In our future, we will share a love so great,
that nothing could ever break it, not even fate.
In our future, we will love with all our heart,
even after death has sent us apart.
In our future, together we will be,
together always and forever you and me.
In our future, we will have a good life,
with you as my husband and me your wife.
In our future, you are a husband and father,
and I am a wife and mother.
In our future, I can see,
just the way things could be.

Copyright Â© ShadowsCloud ... [ 2002-11-24 06:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Our Future (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 10:36:07 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful expression of
your future with the man you love
hope one day he see's this one
Thanks for sharing it, i enjoyed it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Our Future (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 12:34:14 PM AEST
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seems hopeful! i like it!every marriage should be like this... happy.

hug a moose

Re: Our Future (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 10:04:38 PM AEST
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And what a wonderful future it will be for you Candice,
With a very luck man indeed!

Great writing again Candice, it brings about an air of comfort and dreaminess(if that's a word?).

With love
Dean:-)

Re: Our Future (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 12:38:33 AM AEST
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Dean, I really hope that this will be my future with Shadow. I really can see it. I have a very good imagination.

Dreaminess is actually a word! But I have to admit that it is one that even I didn't know. I really thought that it wasn't a word, but it is in my dictionary.
ShadowsCloud

Re: Our Future (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 08:49:37 PM AEST
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It's not in mine Candice,
But if it's in yours, then it should be as it's a good word!

With love
Dean:-)

Re: Our Future (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 09:03:12 PM AEST
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Dean, my dictionary has many words that others do not. It is a rather thick dictionary. It is about 12 inches thick.
ShadowsCloud

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