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My Patricia
Contributed by
sughy
on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:39:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You Are
Attractive, foxy, lovely, fair
Elegant, pretty, bonny, rare
You Are
Tenuous, unique, dainty, fine
Delicate, matchless, separate, mine
You Are
Engaging, pleasing, charming, sweet
Glamorous, tender, gorgeous, neat
You Are My
Angel, darling, sweetie, friend
And Im all yours until the end!
Copyright ©
sughy
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2004-11-30 19:39:31]
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Re: My Patricia
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:07:13 PM AEST
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| good write. but i think this could be better if you had more substance with words. instead of just having basically just adjectives, you could make verses with the adjectives to bring her and the words more to life. =] |
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Re: My Patricia
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by freckle on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 11:25:26 PM AEST
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| I thought this was a really cute poem, lighthearted and flirty...a fun write. |
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