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[aid] => mick
[title] => A Beautiful Cutter
[time] => 2004-12-01 01:34:08
[hometext] => i wrote this today after reading so many sad poems i really do not have much to say about it i dont blame anyone if they do not want to read
[bodytext] => She was there again
Laying down on bathroom floor
Leaning her weight against the toilet seat
Alone and feeling with out a friend
She had been cutting her self again
Bleeding from the wrist
Feeling sick and very weak
Feeling so ugly she had been fasting for a week
Her skin was so pale and looked so thin
There is a pool of tears on the seat
Where she rested her head crying
In the background a hundred feet away
You can hear her parents fighting
Forgetting she was even alive
It was not her fault that her father was about to leave
But she still felt that way in the end
She felt that she was not enough to make him stay
And all she wanted was to be taken away
Far away to a better place
Where no emotions could exist
You can see the pain in her heart reflected on her face
And her tears have left a trace
All because she felt so ugly and needed someone
To tell her it’s not her fault
And that she was so very beautiful
Because the truth is that she is
Was it so much for her to want
Her family to get along and to be happy
Is it so much that she needs someone to hold her
Taking away the cold in heart with warmth
Some one to tell her that she is pretty and to
Help her see the beauty inside so she could see her wings
These are all very simple needs
And she feels worthless without them
She feels like she is not enough and will never be
Not for anyone not for her father not for me
But that can’t be further from the truth
Because has become everything to me
And her mother needs her very much
But she feels like dieing
But she really does not want to
She just wants to be saved
I want to do everything I can to keep her from
Being another beautiful cutter
Who took her own life
Because she did not know the truth
[comments] => 19
[counter] => 946
[topic] => 36
[informant] => Doriens_Picture
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[ratings] => 6
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A Beautiful Cutter
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 01:34:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She was there again
Laying down on bathroom floor
Leaning her weight against the toilet seat
Alone and feeling with out a friend
She had been cutting her self again
Bleeding from the wrist
Feeling sick and very weak
Feeling so ugly she had been fasting for a week
Her skin was so pale and looked so thin
There is a pool of tears on the seat
Where she rested her head crying
In the background a hundred feet away
You can hear her parents fighting
Forgetting she was even alive
It was not her fault that her father was about to leave
But she still felt that way in the end
She felt that she was not enough to make him stay
And all she wanted was to be taken away
Far away to a better place
Where no emotions could exist
You can see the pain in her heart reflected on her face
And her tears have left a trace
All because she felt so ugly and needed someone
To tell her it’s not her fault
And that she was so very beautiful
Because the truth is that she is
Was it so much for her to want
Her family to get along and to be happy
Is it so much that she needs someone to hold her
Taking away the cold in heart with warmth
Some one to tell her that she is pretty and to
Help her see the beauty inside so she could see her wings
These are all very simple needs
And she feels worthless without them
She feels like she is not enough and will never be
Not for anyone not for her father not for me
But that can’t be further from the truth
Because has become everything to me
And her mother needs her very much
But she feels like dieing
But she really does not want to
She just wants to be saved
I want to do everything I can to keep her from
Being another beautiful cutter
Who took her own life
Because she did not know the truth
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Doriens_Picture
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2004-12-01 01:34:08]
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 02:03:21 AM AEST
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Sad but written well.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 04:43:45 AM AEST
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This is beautifully sad,
I feel may be that i can relate to this,
Take care hun
love
Stace x |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:29:00 AM AEST
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I loved this write so much....
it was the best poem I have ever read!....
it brouoght tears to my eyes, it's so powerul and sad,
I can't really relate, but
I know that one of my friends can, I know she thinks this way and she has tried to take her life before, I am so happy she didn't die.
Everytime I look at her I know this is how she thought and how she may still feel. I hope she doesn't but she may.
Thnx you for writing this.
Great write!
*~givingin~* |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by WildfireRose on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:22:00 PM AEST
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| life is so sad sometimes...nice poem |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:32:13 PM AEST
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| amazing and brilliant write. i loved this one. especially without the spaces like you usually have in it. its easier to read and see rhymes and stuff for me. since im such a rhyme freak =] i felt the emotion you put into this. i can understand writing a poem fueled by inspiration of someone close to you and peoples emotions in their other poems. do you ever fail in writing? |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 09:45:01 PM AEST
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sad... but a great write... wonderfully written... enjoyed reading this a lot... again... great write...
hope to c more from u soon
Jishes |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by Dri on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:38:02 PM AEST
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| i love the message here, i know so many people who need to read this poem... good job! |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by MemoriesofthePAST on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 04:57:17 PM AEST
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| hello. my name is darci and i think that is such a true statement or POEM i love it.. its great... even tho sometimes things are deeper than people put them out to be.. so look deep and relize.. |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:20:33 PM AEST
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| You know, I cried. Thats all i can say...I cried like a baby, like the girl in the poem |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by SylviaWalters on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 02:48:33 AM AEST
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I love this poem! A lot of my friends would have no troubles understanding.
Keep it up! |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by OhSaige on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:54:44 PM AEST
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Purely brillant
:) |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by OhSaige on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:59:52 PM AEST
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| I always love reading your material |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by OhSaige on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:21:06 PM AEST
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Bitter sweet
Marvelous |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by psychokiller138 on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 08:09:24 PM AEST
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| i love this...well done! |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 09:19:59 AM AEST
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| Great write! |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by Val-Hundra on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 11:19:56 PM AEST
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| I like very much. I won't say I know how ya feel because no one really ever does, but I can relate. Tres bien! |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by depressedsoul on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:39:30 AM AEST
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Wow i like this ALOT its sad but its a good write, I like this is was like me when i went through a break up i didnt care if i cutted but i got over it my friends helped me through it. Keep it up
Depressed soul |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 07:35:53 PM AEST
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| I can really relat to this. i was a cutter myself and I admit i think about going bacxk. This such a beautiful poen and it shows the world that people like us need to be loved not to be hated |
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Re: A Beautiful Cutter
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 07:35:54 PM AEST
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| I can really relat to this. i was a cutter myself and I admit i think about going bacxk. This such a beautiful poen and it shows the world that people like us need to be loved not to be hated |
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