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Array ( [sid] => 73894 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Harsh words deserved by an absent minded fool. [time] => 2004-12-01 05:39:16 [hometext] => This poem was inspired by rereading my poem called Rip my heart OUT!!!.....it is rather harsh at points but this is a poem well deserved for Richard....though I may say differently after today.....enjoy!! [bodytext] =>

I’m about to take your power; you no longer hold my heart,
So lets make my new start,
I’m going to be that combustion of feeling you haven't witnessed.
We're going to talk where your feelings are going to be confessed.
You have driven me to the point of being forceful with my style.
Our conversation is likely to take awhile.
Will thee listen to the questions I ask? Will thee answer unequivocally?
Please do not answer brusquely.
As I do not wish to argue with you,
I couldn’t stand both of us being blue.
Do not mistake me, I do love you, just I know I can’t have you.
I already know that this is pretty much true.
If I have to settle for friendship so be it, though many say you’re a fool.
Alas, many have been unfairly cruel,
They only know of our bad times, not the good.
When once we would have together stood,
For everything we both believed in,
Our shared belief in our almighty Lord,
Sadly, you seemed have gotten very bored.
As if I am no longer an interesting play toy you wish to cherish,
All you do now is cause the beloved toy anguish.
Now sweetie, you’re going to wake up to me,
It is about time you came to see,
That I am more than you have ever known, parts you have never seen.
You will see that I am definitely beyond my years of sixteen.



SJ



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Harsh words deserved by an absent minded fool.

Contributed by little_genna on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 05:39:16 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems





I’m about to take your power; you no longer hold my heart,
So lets make my new start,
I’m going to be that combustion of feeling you haven't witnessed.
We're going to talk where your feelings are going to be confessed.
You have driven me to the point of being forceful with my style.
Our conversation is likely to take awhile.
Will thee listen to the questions I ask? Will thee answer unequivocally?
Please do not answer brusquely.
As I do not wish to argue with you,
I couldn’t stand both of us being blue.
Do not mistake me, I do love you, just I know I can’t have you.
I already know that this is pretty much true.
If I have to settle for friendship so be it, though many say you’re a fool.
Alas, many have been unfairly cruel,
They only know of our bad times, not the good.
When once we would have together stood,
For everything we both believed in,
Our shared belief in our almighty Lord,
Sadly, you seemed have gotten very bored.
As if I am no longer an interesting play toy you wish to cherish,
All you do now is cause the beloved toy anguish.
Now sweetie, you’re going to wake up to me,
It is about time you came to see,
That I am more than you have ever known, parts you have never seen.
You will see that I am definitely beyond my years of sixteen.



SJ







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Re: Harsh words deserved by an absent minded fool. (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 05:45:22 AM AEST
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you tell him *hugs* you are so much better then he , I really hope you find someone who really deserves you hun,

takecare
pixie xx

a very good write btw


Re: Harsh words deserved by an absent minded fool. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 09:12:58 AM AEST
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Wow.....speechless.... Awesome is all I can seemingly bring myself to say..... Very very Awesome!!!!


Re: Harsh words deserved by an absent minded fool. (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 09:47:39 AM AEST
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:-) ..very well said....cudnt have put it better even if i tried....

Love,
Umang.


Re: Harsh words deserved by an absent minded fool. (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 01:15:08 PM AEST
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you know he is not worthy of you no matter how perfect you think he is




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