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Array ( [sid] => 73940 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => straight down to hell... [time] => 2004-12-01 12:38:58 [hometext] => some people are born to die. your train is waiting... [bodytext] => put rusty hooks in his bed,
lay acid along the sheets,
thrust knives towards his head,
listen to him bubble,
listen to his screams,
have sex with the reapper to take his soul,
watch him lay half dead as he lives his evil dreams,

let him die,
drive a hurse over his body,
spit in his grave,
and stick the tombstone in shoddy,

hang him naked in your room,
carve your name into his back,
watch him cry at his doom,
let him scream,
let him pain,
let him sob,
let him strain,

the reapers done,
hes tired enough to sleep,
so he does it quickly,
and sticks his sythe in and reaps,

watch his spirit leave,
watch him be sentenced to death,
take a moment to pretend to grieve,
then watch him take his final breath,
now burst out with evil laughter,
give him his death certificate and ring the final bell,
tell his spirit his direction,
'straight down to hell'....

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 13 [informant] => In2thetwilightzone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

straight down to hell...

Contributed by In2thetwilightzone on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 12:38:58 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

put rusty hooks in his bed,
lay acid along the sheets,
thrust knives towards his head,
listen to him bubble,
listen to his screams,
have sex with the reapper to take his soul,
watch him lay half dead as he lives his evil dreams,

let him die,
drive a hurse over his body,
spit in his grave,
and stick the tombstone in shoddy,

hang him naked in your room,
carve your name into his back,
watch him cry at his doom,
let him scream,
let him pain,
let him sob,
let him strain,

the reapers done,
hes tired enough to sleep,
so he does it quickly,
and sticks his sythe in and reaps,

watch his spirit leave,
watch him be sentenced to death,
take a moment to pretend to grieve,
then watch him take his final breath,
now burst out with evil laughter,
give him his death certificate and ring the final bell,
tell his spirit his direction,
'straight down to hell'....

Copyright © In2thetwilightzone ... [ 2004-12-01 12:38:58]
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Re: straight down to hell... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 12:41:18 PM AEST
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now that was dark, excelllently written

pixie xx

Re: straight down to hell... (User Rating: 1 )
by sandy_poetrygodslove on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 12:50:37 PM AEST
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I read this as this. that the devil is being killed and thrown down to hell. and as I did. I loved it. and enjoyed every bit of it. and liked all the details.

Re: straight down to hell... (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 12:51:21 PM AEST
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wow, that was a very dark poem,
I enjoyed reading it.

*~givingin~*

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