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Array ( [sid] => 73988 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => As I die [time] => 2004-12-01 17:43:33 [hometext] => This is just the way i'd like to think when the people I love die. [bodytext] => As I die I open my eyes
and look up at the old blue sky
I watch as the clouds float away
I never thought i'd see this day

the wind blows gently across my face
getting my body ready for the other place
the warm feeling inside my chest
is leading me to the path of eternal rest

my body feels free, and so painless
is this the beggining of true happiness
sunshine creeps arcross my eyes
I shut them slowly as my body dies

when they shut a field of flowers incase the land
dying is nothing like I had planned
I always thought it was darkness and sin
but this peaceful world is the new life I begin

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As I die

Contributed by Dragontear27 on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 05:43:33 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

As I die I open my eyes
and look up at the old blue sky
I watch as the clouds float away
I never thought i'd see this day

the wind blows gently across my face
getting my body ready for the other place
the warm feeling inside my chest
is leading me to the path of eternal rest

my body feels free, and so painless
is this the beggining of true happiness
sunshine creeps arcross my eyes
I shut them slowly as my body dies

when they shut a field of flowers incase the land
dying is nothing like I had planned
I always thought it was darkness and sin
but this peaceful world is the new life I begin

Copyright © Dragontear27 ... [ 2004-12-01 17:43:33]
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Re: As I die (User Rating: 1 )
by kisser89 on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 06:00:53 PM AEST
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great, luv how it all flows together, keep it : )

Re: As I die (User Rating: 1 )
by x_midnight_x on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 06:44:27 PM AEST
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i cant believe this poem has been read so many times with only 1 comment?
geeez this is what we need and are hungry for!
i love it...as i close my eyes and my body dies...
we are energy made of love and light,
never ceasing existance and eternally bright.
blessings to you and yours,
midnight x
(i hope theres loads to come...very inspirational...theres too much gloom and doom already...
life is exciting and so is the beyond :)

Re: As I die (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:15:54 PM AEST
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I hope to have that Peace passing over too
Beautifully written

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