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Array ( [sid] => 74001 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Thought He Never Saw Me [time] => 2004-12-01 19:29:56 [hometext] => I wrote this for Eric. It is the sequel to [bodytext] => Teardrops hit the floor
As I cry in the dark
"Why doesn't he see me?"
I whisper to nothingness
He doesn't see me.
He never saw me.
Hope pours from my body
Lying limp and curled on the floor
Racking with sobs
Wishing he was there
To fix me
But...
He doesn't see me.
He never saw me.
I feel so alone.
I wan't to die.
I lift the blade up
Over my head
Down down it goes
I count the seconds
The blade clatters to the floor.
He is there!
His hands clenched around mine
I look twice
Are those tears in his eyes?
He sobs quietly and then...
Wraps his arms around me
Tightly, like he was afraid I would disappear
He whispers so soft
But I heard him loud and clear
"I always saw you." [comments] => 6 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 22 [informant] => DesolantDreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
I Thought He Never Saw Me

Contributed by DesolantDreamer on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 07:29:56 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Teardrops hit the floor
As I cry in the dark
"Why doesn't he see me?"
I whisper to nothingness
He doesn't see me.
He never saw me.
Hope pours from my body
Lying limp and curled on the floor
Racking with sobs
Wishing he was there
To fix me
But...
He doesn't see me.
He never saw me.
I feel so alone.
I wan't to die.
I lift the blade up
Over my head
Down down it goes
I count the seconds
The blade clatters to the floor.
He is there!
His hands clenched around mine
I look twice
Are those tears in his eyes?
He sobs quietly and then...
Wraps his arms around me
Tightly, like he was afraid I would disappear
He whispers so soft
But I heard him loud and clear
"I always saw you."




Copyright © DesolantDreamer ... [ 2004-12-01 19:29:56]
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Re: I Thought He Never Saw Me (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:07:02 PM AEST
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aww....so sweet.... the ending was of course my favorite part. i've always dreamed of someone taking me into their arms and just yeah...

good job.


Re: I Thought He Never Saw Me (User Rating: 1 )
by WildfireRose on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:27:14 PM AEST
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wow..that made me cry...I know mine doesn't see me...hope you have a good day


Re: I Thought He Never Saw Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:42:29 PM AEST
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aw... beautiful write... so tragic

-Chanti


Re: I Thought He Never Saw Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:19:20 AM AEST
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aww... this was so sweet... great write...

~!*!~hugs~!*!~
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~


Re: I Thought He Never Saw Me (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedangel on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 06:51:55 AM AEST
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wow that was great awsome omg i cried i wish my guy culd see me, but he never notices im here 4 him well done ur poem is beautiful i loved it

cyaz
sera


Re: I Thought He Never Saw Me (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 11:43:16 AM AEST
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This was really good.. I liked it alot.. It was sad..

take care
christina




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