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Array ( [sid] => 74032 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Letter to my dead Friend [time] => 2004-12-01 22:55:10 [hometext] => A painful letter poem to my friend who killed herself [bodytext] => I still think of you,
Maybe i'm the only one,
But you just happen to stay on my mind.

I saw you in my dreams the other day,
You were laughing so happy,
So much joy writing on your face
And when i awoke it was like it was real,
The smile

The laugh

The feel


"Hey the other day i went home to NewYork...I had a real good time"
But you already know huh?(tears forming in my eyes i'm crying)
I miss you, I miss you so much, just because i know
That our friendship would grow.

That weekend that you killed yourself,
I had refused to get help.
I just wanted to know why
Maybe not, that would probably just hurt more.

I'm trying to keep this letter together but the tears are slowing me down,
I MISS YOU SO MUCH, i wish you could write me back
Tell me something
TELL ME ANYTHING!!!PLEASE

This is the hardest letter i ever had to write,
Just because i know you'll ......
NEVER WRITE ME BACK

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 38 [informant] => discantbelife [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Tributes )
Letter to my dead Friend

Contributed by discantbelife on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:55:10 PM in AEST
Topic: Tributes



I still think of you,
Maybe i'm the only one,
But you just happen to stay on my mind.

I saw you in my dreams the other day,
You were laughing so happy,
So much joy writing on your face
And when i awoke it was like it was real,
The smile

The laugh

The feel


"Hey the other day i went home to NewYork...I had a real good time"
But you already know huh?(tears forming in my eyes i'm crying)
I miss you, I miss you so much, just because i know
That our friendship would grow.

That weekend that you killed yourself,
I had refused to get help.
I just wanted to know why
Maybe not, that would probably just hurt more.

I'm trying to keep this letter together but the tears are slowing me down,
I MISS YOU SO MUCH, i wish you could write me back
Tell me something
TELL ME ANYTHING!!!PLEASE

This is the hardest letter i ever had to write,
Just because i know you'll ......
NEVER WRITE ME BACK





Copyright © discantbelife ... [ 2004-12-01 22:55:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Letter to my dead Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:05:46 PM AEST
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This is so sad but it's a masterpeice as others will read it and realize how suicide effects the ones left behind.
It will probably save lives as it's so touching and truthfull.
God bless u for sharing this as I feel others will think before they act.
luv, huggs, prayer, peace, hope,
emy
I'm trully sorry for your loss.


Re: Letter to my dead Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:46:41 AM AEST
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omg this is beautiful
well done
my heart goes out to you




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