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Skies of fire
Contributed by
atreyuskye
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:31:55 PM in AEST
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a wanted paradise
inside my head
a wall of unpenitrable pain
i know its not real
empeiness sits inside my being
hurt is all im seeing
my heart is gone
couldn't take the pain anymore
empty layers of skin
from outside and within
this must be the end
a suicide note in disguise
this is a recording of my demise
i will disappear to the skies
skies of fire
thats where i will retire
my pain climbs higher and higher
suffering in noise and silence
no more lying
no more sighing(away my anguish)
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2004-12-02 18:31:55]
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Re: Skies of fire
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 07:11:40 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. it looks like you tried to rhyme some of this, but the other parts dont looked rhymed at all. kinds of messes up the rhythym, but thats okay. |
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