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Array ( [sid] => 74321 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gone Without A Sound [time] => 2004-12-03 19:50:51 [hometext] => This is about a girl that was in love with a guy but never ever told him about it and it turned out that he felt the same way about her but then he died and neither one of them ever found out. [bodytext] => She walks through the school and studies his face
Her eyes start to glow, and her heart begins to race
Why doesn’t he notice her, why can’t he see her?
She feels like she’s gone, like she’s not even there
Her soul is empty and her feelings are bare
She wants him to notice her and she wants him to care
She doesn’t want to live her life, wishing he were there
She just wants to talk to him, just make him understand
What she would do just to kiss him
How much it would mean to her just to hold his hand
She thinks she loves him
If only she could talk to Tim
She plans to do that the next morning
On the way to school when she sees him
Only thing is when she gets there she doesn’t see Tim
When she arrived at school the children are sad
Something horrible has happened, something really, really bad
Announces Mr. Martin over the P.A
Tim has left; Tim cannot be with us today
This doesn’t make sense; she can’t see what’s happening
All she has is empty space
All she can think of is his sympathetic face
Ill get over this she says, it’s only a phase
As the principal speaks, everyone bows their head and prays
Rest in peace Tim, the principal says
And she broke out in tears, just hoping it wasn’t true
She loved him and he loved her too
They loved each other but know he’ll never know
All because he’s gone, all because he had to go
One red light, one disrespectful person, the laws were disobeyed
The drivers the one who walks
But Tim’s the one who pays.
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Gone Without A Sound

Contributed by hugs_and_kisses_cutie on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:50:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



She walks through the school and studies his face
Her eyes start to glow, and her heart begins to race
Why doesn’t he notice her, why can’t he see her?
She feels like she’s gone, like she’s not even there
Her soul is empty and her feelings are bare
She wants him to notice her and she wants him to care
She doesn’t want to live her life, wishing he were there
She just wants to talk to him, just make him understand
What she would do just to kiss him
How much it would mean to her just to hold his hand
She thinks she loves him
If only she could talk to Tim
She plans to do that the next morning
On the way to school when she sees him
Only thing is when she gets there she doesn’t see Tim
When she arrived at school the children are sad
Something horrible has happened, something really, really bad
Announces Mr. Martin over the P.A
Tim has left; Tim cannot be with us today
This doesn’t make sense; she can’t see what’s happening
All she has is empty space
All she can think of is his sympathetic face
Ill get over this she says, it’s only a phase
As the principal speaks, everyone bows their head and prays
Rest in peace Tim, the principal says
And she broke out in tears, just hoping it wasn’t true
She loved him and he loved her too
They loved each other but know he’ll never know
All because he’s gone, all because he had to go
One red light, one disrespectful person, the laws were disobeyed
The drivers the one who walks
But Tim’s the one who pays.




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Re: Gone Without A Sound (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 08:10:10 PM AEST
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omg...this is soo....sad. It's a GREAT poem, and it holds so much...tragedy(sp?)....great write =)


Re: Gone Without A Sound (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 08:33:18 PM AEST
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great concept.........good emotion.....i liked this very much. I love your style




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