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but i just cant stand the pain
as the sun dawns over the horrizon
i slowly go insane

another day full of torment
another day all alone
thought of you run though my head
and my heart, it turns to stone

suicide may be selfish
but im not in the mood to share
i cant stand one more day
wishing i wasnt there

i want to tell you how i feel
i really want some help
but all the cries that seem so loud
come out as a silent yelp

so maybe one day someone
will hear my deperate plea
and finally open up their eyes
and face what they dont want to see [comments] => 5 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 36 [informant] => cinderella88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

things you dont want to see

Contributed by cinderella88 on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 08:21:09 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

i know there no point in running
but i just cant stand the pain
as the sun dawns over the horrizon
i slowly go insane

another day full of torment
another day all alone
thought of you run though my head
and my heart, it turns to stone

suicide may be selfish
but im not in the mood to share
i cant stand one more day
wishing i wasnt there

i want to tell you how i feel
i really want some help
but all the cries that seem so loud
come out as a silent yelp

so maybe one day someone
will hear my deperate plea
and finally open up their eyes
and face what they dont want to see

Copyright © cinderella88 ... [ 2004-12-04 20:21:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: things you dont want to see (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 08:37:40 PM AEST
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Very sad but strong write.
Hang in there, friend.
Get help from your Dr. Medication can help.
With medication you can deal with things much better.
I use to be very un happy and didn't care if I lived or not but finally a smart Dr. got me on the right meds. I live allone but I'm happy.
Think about it please.
luv, huggs, strength to endure,
emy

Re: things you dont want to see (User Rating: 1 )
by happybunnyfan on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:25:45 PM AEST
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yeah i feel that way sometimes to, but when i do i talk to my friends maybe u should try that. if u need to talk i'm here.
hugs, and strengh to carry on.

Re: things you dont want to see (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:36:25 PM AEST
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Maybe is always the way...I gave up long ago on maybes...but you have at least a chance...people here care in their own way some show it others dont but grasp onto what ever reason and caring you can.
Awesome poem...reaching out with true feeling...showing strength to post something endearing about you....

Re: things you dont want to see (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:09:30 PM AEST
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beautiful write,
"suicide may be selfish
but im not in the mood to share"
dont give up on life just yet...
-Chanti

Re: things you dont want to see (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:53:53 PM AEST
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It is true, but there are always people out there that will look and offer help.

It was very well write,n and very moving emotionaly

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