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Array ( [sid] => 74502 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => life support [time] => 2004-12-05 13:07:19 [hometext] => once you read, you will no were on stand on life support [bodytext] => dieing slowly, still awake
yelling kill me know, for heavens sake
hooked on machines bearly conscious
God this world makes me nacious

time to die has been delayed
my memories start to fade
i close my eyes and start to pray
God don't make me stay

end this now i want to leave
take me now, i've done my deeds
i've paid my dues and served my time
take me now, i've done no crime

so here i am once again
thinking will he take me, and when
i ly here consious of my thoughts
drowning in self-pity [comments] => 2 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 25 [informant] => co_cane13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
life support

Contributed by co_cane13 on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 01:07:19 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



dieing slowly, still awake
yelling kill me know, for heavens sake
hooked on machines bearly conscious
God this world makes me nacious

time to die has been delayed
my memories start to fade
i close my eyes and start to pray
God don't make me stay

end this now i want to leave
take me now, i've done my deeds
i've paid my dues and served my time
take me now, i've done no crime

so here i am once again
thinking will he take me, and when
i ly here consious of my thoughts
drowning in self-pity




Copyright © co_cane13 ... [ 2004-12-05 13:07:19]
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Re: life support (User Rating: 1 )
by In2thetwilightzone on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:38:56 PM AEST
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great piece, a bit suspended and unsatisfied with the ending, it got to such a climax! it sounded like you rushed to finish it!!! please have a more powerful ending next time! as for the rest, jolly jolly jolly, good stuff!


Re: life support (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:48:39 PM AEST
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I agree with the other poster, it was a really good write and kind of let me down at the end. Good job though, keep sharing!




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