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These are the thoughts of a mind overthrown
By a poisoned heart and a weakened esteem
Deep down inside I just want to scream
To let people know how I feel inside
To let them know that my will has died
And that I think I shouldn't live anymore
I can't see myself the way I was before
Cuz now I think of all the tears I've shed
And all th cruel things that you have said
Did you ever think that your words caused pain?
The kind that depresses and dives us insane
I see no more reason to keep the lights on
Lost in myself, I've become so withdrawn
From all the things I used to know and love
No matter how I try, I can't rise above
All the pain that stabs me straight in the heart
There seems so no way out, so I must depart
From this life, that in living I regret
And all this pain, that I can't forget [comments] => 3 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 32 [informant] => cinderella88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

cant forget......

Contributed by cinderella88 on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:15:14 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I can't shake the feeing that i'm so alone
These are the thoughts of a mind overthrown
By a poisoned heart and a weakened esteem
Deep down inside I just want to scream
To let people know how I feel inside
To let them know that my will has died
And that I think I shouldn't live anymore
I can't see myself the way I was before
Cuz now I think of all the tears I've shed
And all th cruel things that you have said
Did you ever think that your words caused pain?
The kind that depresses and dives us insane
I see no more reason to keep the lights on
Lost in myself, I've become so withdrawn
From all the things I used to know and love
No matter how I try, I can't rise above
All the pain that stabs me straight in the heart
There seems so no way out, so I must depart
From this life, that in living I regret
And all this pain, that I can't forget

Copyright © cinderella88 ... [ 2004-12-05 23:15:14]
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Re: cant forget...... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:27:32 PM AEST
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I hope-n-pray this is jus writing.
It's sad but written well.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: cant forget...... (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 01:50:24 AM AEST
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awesome!!!!!!!
lotsa love,
Caiti
xoxo

Re: cant forget...... (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 04:17:34 AM AEST
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If this poem is based on your experience, then that makes this poem even more amazing. So much emotions revolve in the piece. Great!

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