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Array ( [sid] => 74651 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => what happended [time] => 2004-12-06 16:17:38 [hometext] => kinda ***** spelling might not be to good but whatever [bodytext] => What happened to that guy?
The guy that once held me close
under a moon lit sky.

The guy that once held me
while I cried.

The guy that told me
everythings gonna be alright

Who is this new guy
A self centered jerk

The guy i once knew
is now the guy
he always said he wouldnt

remember when you said
youd always be there for me?

Well where are you now?

Oh thats right your off
doing some skanky
little 8th grader

You have sunk to a new low

The guy
I once loved

Now makes me
wanna vomit

Always trin to skam your friends
take there money
Never see them again

What happended
to that twinkle in your eye
The eyes I once loved to look apon

Are now empty voids
Showing no emotion
Like theres nothing inside

Wheres that guy
That I once
could have a heart felt
talk with

When now we talk
its full of
akwerd sliences
as if we are two stangers
and never lovers

Who is this drug addict
That replaced you?

When will you be the same again?

What happened [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 6 [informant] => vampyrekiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
what happended

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 04:17:38 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



What happened to that guy?
The guy that once held me close
under a moon lit sky.

The guy that once held me
while I cried.

The guy that told me
everythings gonna be alright

Who is this new guy
A self centered jerk

The guy i once knew
is now the guy
he always said he wouldnt

remember when you said
youd always be there for me?

Well where are you now?

Oh thats right your off
doing some skanky
little 8th grader

You have sunk to a new low

The guy
I once loved

Now makes me
wanna vomit

Always trin to skam your friends
take there money
Never see them again

What happended
to that twinkle in your eye
The eyes I once loved to look apon

Are now empty voids
Showing no emotion
Like theres nothing inside

Wheres that guy
That I once
could have a heart felt
talk with

When now we talk
its full of
akwerd sliences
as if we are two stangers
and never lovers

Who is this drug addict
That replaced you?

When will you be the same again?

What happened




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Re: what happended (User Rating: 1 )
by LilGnefkow on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 04:27:36 PM AEST
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I can really feel what you're trying to get across...my best friend ended up kinda like this..all but the drug addict part. I loved him so much, he was like a brother to me. Its SO hard, and now he wants to be friends again. Idk if this guy wants that, but if he ever does, it gets way harder. I'm always thinking about him and I hate it SO much. I feel what you're feeling right now.

-Allison


Re: what happended (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 05:33:36 PM AEST
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great emotion in this piece,
well done!


Re: what happended (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 05:43:11 PM AEST
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awesome expression and i understand your anger sometimes people let drugs or others influence its sad when they let things happen and lose the appreciation of a love one.. hang in there things will get better

Peace and hope
JENNI




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