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Silent as the grave
Walking through the town
I can see you
A shadow beside me
As if we still knew one another
When talking was easy
And laughter fit your mouth
Breathing in the stillness
You have become
What you said you were
As if death has claimed you
Yet left you behind
In silence
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In Silence

Contributed by merry on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 07:40:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Quiet now – never a sound
Silent as the grave
Walking through the town
I can see you
A shadow beside me
As if we still knew one another
When talking was easy
And laughter fit your mouth
Breathing in the stillness
You have become
What you said you were
As if death has claimed you
Yet left you behind
In silence

Copyright Â© merry ... [ 2004-12-06 19:40:50]
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Re: In Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 07:48:31 PM AEST
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I know that feeling of grasping at the silence when there is nothing else left to hold onto, but you have put it into words.
Stitch

Re: In Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:12:09 PM AEST
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beautiful write -

"When talking was easy
And laughter fit your mouth
Breathing in the stillness" - loved these lines!

-Chanti

Re: In Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Summerwine on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:53:14 PM AEST
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I felt every word...i am in a situation myself where the silence is enough to shatter my eardrums... loved it, ty

Re: In Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by cuddlytiger17 on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:54:56 PM AEST
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I agree with Chanti, those lines were beautiful. :)

Re: In Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Amaterian_Angel on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:49:31 AM AEST
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Hi... just joind this site and your poem is the first one I've read. It's VERY good. Simple but very effective...

Re: In Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 06:37:39 AM AEST
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Very, very well done!!
You have found just the right words for something so difficult to express!

Re: In Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 09:04:33 AM AEST
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wow that was written beautifully yet it was so very sad, you made the readers feel your pain ,

pixie xx

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