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Array ( [sid] => 74678 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => AIN'T NOTHIN' WRONG WIT DRANKIN' [time] => 2004-12-06 20:39:46 [hometext] => A country drunk, learns about life in the big city..... [bodytext] => Well I started a drinkin
Twas just the other day...
When I looked up, this good lookin gal
Were a- headin down my way...
I knew what she was thinkin
Cause she smiled and wiggled her lil hips
Well I smiled right back at her
And proceeded to another sip....
Bout the time she came up to me
I could tell we wuz gonna be friends
Cause she said "I know what your thinkin"
"And honey this ain't free!"
She said " i got the time, if you drop the dime,
And a place where we can go"...
Oh I had plenty money, and this one thing I know
I only had DRANK one bottle and she looked real good for sho!
Off we went to her lil hideaway
And I kissed her here, and I kissed her there...
Then all of a sudden "Whoa!"
You'd never guess what I had found
I said "What the .."
"Is that a bulge underneath your gown?"
And somethin musta told me
To look right at her breast
But when I got there, she had more hair
Than I do on my chest!
That knocked me right down from a real good high you see
Now I knewed, This was a dude
And boy was he ugly!!!


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AIN'T NOTHIN' WRONG WIT DRANKIN'

Contributed by summerwine on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:39:46 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Well I started a drinkin
Twas just the other day...
When I looked up, this good lookin gal
Were a- headin down my way...
I knew what she was thinkin
Cause she smiled and wiggled her lil hips
Well I smiled right back at her
And proceeded to another sip....
Bout the time she came up to me
I could tell we wuz gonna be friends
Cause she said "I know what your thinkin"
"And honey this ain't free!"
She said " i got the time, if you drop the dime,
And a place where we can go"...
Oh I had plenty money, and this one thing I know
I only had DRANK one bottle and she looked real good for sho!
Off we went to her lil hideaway
And I kissed her here, and I kissed her there...
Then all of a sudden "Whoa!"
You'd never guess what I had found
I said "What the .."
"Is that a bulge underneath your gown?"
And somethin musta told me
To look right at her breast
But when I got there, she had more hair
Than I do on my chest!
That knocked me right down from a real good high you see
Now I knewed, This was a dude
And boy was he ugly!!!






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Re: AIN'T NOTHIN' WRONG WIT DRANKIN' (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:50:54 PM AEST
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original write. very creative.


Re: AIN'T NOTHIN' WRONG WIT DRANKIN' (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:52:31 PM AEST
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LMAO!!! Hope Pixie reads this..lol.... (sorry Pixie, couldn't resist)
This was hilarious, Summer... absolutely loved it.....
Jenni


Re: AIN'T NOTHIN' WRONG WIT DRANKIN' (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:20:11 AM AEST
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roflmao! you cracked me up with this one yes I would see where your nice buzz would melt after this one very creative write indeed
Michelle


Re: AIN'T NOTHIN' WRONG WIT DRANKIN' (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 04:55:18 AM AEST
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A she man ?
I think I thunk
I'm donna get drunk
Funny hunk

Sinned


Re: AIN'T NOTHIN' WRONG WIT DRANKIN' (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:42:15 AM AEST
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Nice accent. You're creative and worth reading again.

Well done.




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