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Array ( [sid] => 74790 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Friends [time] => 2004-12-07 16:51:30 [hometext] => keh...like most of my stuff, it tis not that great. Dedicated to an old [bodytext] => You've hurt me deeper than you know
There's no going back now
It'll never be the same
It's all been one big lie

Since our first fight,
All i wanted was to die
I was nothing compared to you
You were so much better
I tried to be better, but i never meant for this
Why didn't you tell me
Why did you lie and why did you hide

Isn't that what friends are for?
Sharing secrets, trustworthy?
You say you're sorry
but then you turn around and just do it again
You say you're sorry
but obviously, You say alot of things

You blame this on me, but what did i do?
You say i hurt you and made you do it
What did i do? Did i hold the knife to your arm?
Did i cut you? Or was that a lie too.
Did you just scratch your arm and blame it on me


You won't win, you can't
I won't let you hold me down
I didn't do ***** to you, i'd never hurt you on purpose
You kept your emotions bottled up and say you told me
I did my best to help you always
I thought we'd be friends forever, but you always have to prove me wrong

So it's over now
I wish i could forgive you
I wish this would be over
But you've gone to far and cut my wounds too deep.
It's over, i'm gone
So go on with your life like nothing ever happened
And we'll all be happier now that we're gone.
So far gone. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 48 [informant] => killingmehslowly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Friends

Contributed by killingmehslowly on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 04:51:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



You've hurt me deeper than you know
There's no going back now
It'll never be the same
It's all been one big lie

Since our first fight,
All i wanted was to die
I was nothing compared to you
You were so much better
I tried to be better, but i never meant for this
Why didn't you tell me
Why did you lie and why did you hide

Isn't that what friends are for?
Sharing secrets, trustworthy?
You say you're sorry
but then you turn around and just do it again
You say you're sorry
but obviously, You say alot of things

You blame this on me, but what did i do?
You say i hurt you and made you do it
What did i do? Did i hold the knife to your arm?
Did i cut you? Or was that a lie too.
Did you just scratch your arm and blame it on me


You won't win, you can't
I won't let you hold me down
I didn't do ***** to you, i'd never hurt you on purpose
You kept your emotions bottled up and say you told me
I did my best to help you always
I thought we'd be friends forever, but you always have to prove me wrong

So it's over now
I wish i could forgive you
I wish this would be over
But you've gone to far and cut my wounds too deep.
It's over, i'm gone
So go on with your life like nothing ever happened
And we'll all be happier now that we're gone.
So far gone.




Copyright © killingmehslowly ... [ 2004-12-07 16:51:30]
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Re: Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 09:07:16 PM AEST
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good write.


Re: Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by Unheard_Mute on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:31:36 PM AEST
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Hey sami, good write indeed... who are you talking aboot on there? You're very wrong, I love your poetry, it are good... so why can't I read the poetry in your binder? Much luv little one




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