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The Day
Contributed by
forgottenone_iam
on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:06:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The day was cloudy it was a sad day
it looked like god was about to cry
i was about in tears and i suddenly
i look up at the mountains which are
behind me, they bring back so many
good memories.
Memories i wish i could have back,
the memory of you and what we
had and what we were, the nights
i would call you and you would
tell me that you were looking up
at the mountains because you new
they were my favorite thing.
But i look up at the mountains once
more and i see the sun setting behind
them, thats something i wanted to do
with you, and something i will never
get to do with you, there are the
prettiest shades of yellow, purple,
pinks and oranges, i cant stop looking
at the sun.
It would of been the perfect thing that
the two of us could do, thats all we
talked about, we alwayz said that when
we saw each other again we would go out
to a park by your house and watch the
sun set, you said you could see the mountains
perfectly from where you lived.
I sit there in the car as it moves down the
free way almost in tears, missing you and
knowning that while i am down here i wont
even get to see you again.
We pass your town and i start to cry, then
we pass the hotel we met at and i cry even
harder, i dont know how much more i can
handle this, i wanna see you, i know i cant.
I may never get another chance either,
it only depends on if i see you again in
life i hope i do, i want the sparks to fly again,
that would be perfect.
I just want you to know you are alwayz
on my mind, and will alwayz be in my heart,
no matter what i do, and i will alwayz
love you no matter what, even as a friend.
To: Tyler
Love: Kimmie
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forgottenone_iam
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2004-12-07 22:06:49]
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Re: The Day
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by ButchCorpuz on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 11:15:19 AM AEST
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I'm sure that Tyler would really like this. It's a good poem, but I suggest you correct some grammatical errors in the poem, it would help enhance the beauty that is already there.
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