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If I made my feelings clear

And told you that you are my one and only

How would you feel if I said that I find you to be?

So much more than perfect in every way

And that someday I would like to marry you

So I could wake up next to you in the morning

And be in another dream

Would we change if I told you the truth?

Could you ever love me the same way?

Or in any way at all

Would you accept my heart if I were to give it to you unconditionally

And not ask your heart in return

But it is one thing I do hope for every day

It keeps me going

If we made what we felt clear

Would the distance between us tear us farther apart?

What do you really feel about me?

Is it possible that someday I could be loved?

I sometimes find it so hard to

But do you I wonder

I really do not need to know

I just needed to ask
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If I Made My Feelings Clear

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:58:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

What would you do if I said I loved you?

If I made my feelings clear

And told you that you are my one and only

How would you feel if I said that I find you to be?

So much more than perfect in every way

And that someday I would like to marry you

So I could wake up next to you in the morning

And be in another dream

Would we change if I told you the truth?

Could you ever love me the same way?

Or in any way at all

Would you accept my heart if I were to give it to you unconditionally

And not ask your heart in return

But it is one thing I do hope for every day

It keeps me going

If we made what we felt clear

Would the distance between us tear us farther apart?

What do you really feel about me?

Is it possible that someday I could be loved?

I sometimes find it so hard to

But do you I wonder

I really do not need to know

I just needed to ask

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-12-07 22:58:28]
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Re: If I Made My Feelings Clear (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:24:57 AM AEST
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Very beautifull and touching.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: If I Made My Feelings Clear (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:49:21 AM AEST
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This is very touching John,
I hung off every word.....

LOVE
Stace x

Re: If I Made My Feelings Clear (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:13:42 AM AEST
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I think every single person (I would like to think) has had an unrequited love or wanted so badly to ask but didn't know how.

I'm really impressed with this poem and your obvious talent.

Kie

Re: If I Made My Feelings Clear (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:07:33 PM AEST
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im torn on what to think of issues such as this. ask and get denied and never wonder. dont ask dont get denied and always wonder. wondering for me isnt as painful, but im different in a lot of cases, so this just might be another one.

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