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Array ( [sid] => 74846 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Pain [time] => 2004-12-07 23:47:27 [hometext] => The title explains itself. [bodytext] => Deep inside my darkness,
Is the pain I hide in me.
Kept safe away from friends,
For only my eyes to see.

So powerful is my pain,
The burden may not be held.
Only on my shoulders should
There rest the weight of hell.

I journey alone on my long road,
With failure lingering behind.
I fear that if this road won't end,
I may snap and lose my mind.

I've done my job and paid my dues,
Yet still I'm asked for more.
They take and take until I'm empty,
And then they take some more.

There's nothing left but a rotten shell,
Of the girl I used to be.
And still my pain stays locked away,
For only my eyes to see.
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My Pain

Contributed by Broken_Wingz on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 11:47:27 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Deep inside my darkness,
Is the pain I hide in me.
Kept safe away from friends,
For only my eyes to see.

So powerful is my pain,
The burden may not be held.
Only on my shoulders should
There rest the weight of hell.

I journey alone on my long road,
With failure lingering behind.
I fear that if this road won't end,
I may snap and lose my mind.

I've done my job and paid my dues,
Yet still I'm asked for more.
They take and take until I'm empty,
And then they take some more.

There's nothing left but a rotten shell,
Of the girl I used to be.
And still my pain stays locked away,
For only my eyes to see.

Copyright © Broken_Wingz ... [ 2004-12-07 23:47:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 12:07:17 AM AEST
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Good Poem, i always hide my pain, and go on my journey alone too. I always fear that the road isnt going to end too, and i wonder when im going to snap too. If u ever need to talk about it, you can always pm me.

Re: My Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 12:30:01 AM AEST
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i feel like this alot but know your writes show something to me and it is how great you could still really be

Re: My Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 05:19:50 AM AEST
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Very well expressed, never give up though, it would be such a waste. Keep writing about your feelings and hopefully one day you will trust someone enough to talk about them. Take care,

Ali xx

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