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A Girl In The Stars
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 12:08:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I can see you there dancing in the clarity of the night
As your grace mingles with the moons frail light
Frail because it leaves the moon to be with you
Making you glow as it sets into
The clouds that cover the stars in the nighttime sky
Making you the most beautiful site
The stars shed their grace on you covering you with star dust
The night forms with you a powerful bond of trust
Wanting to be one with you so that all can see
Loving you and all of your beauty
So the stars begin to fall and come to you to take you away
To take you to a better and more deserving place
One where people would love you as much as I do in every way
One where you will be made to feel the way you should every day
Wanted, loved, admired and worshiped by all those who are in your grace
But that would not be nothing too new I have always seen the true beauty of your face
Its in your eyes where I see what means most to me in my life
Its your soul that shines brightly warming mine freeing me from all the strife
This is why the stars want you as one of them in the nighttime sky
So all who see you love you and feel the same comforts from you as I
There is really no better place for you for my darling
I will hurt to see you go but it will just be a small scarling
Because I will be able to see you when the sun has fully set
This is why giving you to the sky leaves me with no regrets
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Re: A Girl In The Stars
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 12:29:08 AM AEST
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U r so modest. U write a masterpeice and then say u wasn't in the mood to write.
Grear job as always.
luv, huggs, smiles, stars,
emy |
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Re: A Girl In The Stars
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 01:58:34 AM AEST
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This is excellent you always put ur best writes down.
Its just an amazing feeling that i get from this poem.
Love
Stace xx |
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Re: A Girl In The Stars
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:33:12 PM AEST
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| i agree with emy. |
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Re: A Girl In The Stars
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 05:03:04 PM AEST
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WOW!
I am amazed. And this is a not in the mood to write poet? My goodness. This was perfect. *S* Cynthia |
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