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Array ( [sid] => 74982 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BYE BYE BYE [time] => 2004-12-09 00:36:23 [hometext] => I figured I would share this its one i wrote when i was 15.. it was inspired by edgar allan poe feel free to comment [bodytext] => I leave the world
bye, bye, bye

I have come and gone
like the fallen snow

No one cares;
my spirit fills the air
I wonder if anyone can see clear

I go now
I wonder how
I had a life but the wind
blew by and wisked me away with it

cold icy breath of death was at my hand
that is not normally what I had planned but things happen

I had opened a door to happiness
it shut right in my face
I feel so out of place

I leave this world without a trace
my life is gone and so am I

Please I want no one to cry
bye, bye, bye,
my friends I bid farewell

I lived my lonely life and told the tale
alone as I was I had a soulmate
perhaps he was not of my fate?

It is too late for me to wait
I go now
bye, bye, bye
at least I did try

My love , my life don't mourn over me
I always knew I was worth nothing of value

you will find another to love
someone better than your own
you will not remain alone

I leave the world
bye, bye bye
no one cry!

JENNI
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 510 [topic] => 13 [informant] => PhantomVampyress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
BYE BYE BYE

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 12:36:23 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I leave the world
bye, bye, bye

I have come and gone
like the fallen snow

No one cares;
my spirit fills the air
I wonder if anyone can see clear

I go now
I wonder how
I had a life but the wind
blew by and wisked me away with it

cold icy breath of death was at my hand
that is not normally what I had planned but things happen

I had opened a door to happiness
it shut right in my face
I feel so out of place

I leave this world without a trace
my life is gone and so am I

Please I want no one to cry
bye, bye, bye,
my friends I bid farewell

I lived my lonely life and told the tale
alone as I was I had a soulmate
perhaps he was not of my fate?

It is too late for me to wait
I go now
bye, bye, bye
at least I did try

My love , my life don't mourn over me
I always knew I was worth nothing of value

you will find another to love
someone better than your own
you will not remain alone

I leave the world
bye, bye bye
no one cry!

JENNI




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Re: BYE BYE BYE (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 12:42:35 AM AEST
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Well I'm really happy to hear it's an older one.
U r destined to write and had u gone the world would be missing out on your own unique voice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: BYE BYE BYE (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 01:33:38 AM AEST
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come come come no bye you have to write many more poems
girish


Re: BYE BYE BYE (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 11:28:57 PM AEST
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Aww Jenni ~
I love your poem. Very sweet. If this is what you wanted at this age I'm sorry!!! Love ya lots!


Re: BYE BYE BYE (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 10:53:48 AM AEST
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Haunted_Soul

NO !
You can't go !


All the plants

will die.


Sinned




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