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Array ( [sid] => 75179 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Once u fooled me - Shame on you....Twice u fooled me - Shame on me [time] => 2004-12-10 11:03:21 [hometext] => Hi...this ones written by me with stacey....both of us r goin through a hard time.....staces in bold....comments welcome [bodytext] => Memories condescending....
Why do you bother with your pretending

Strip the mask off....kill the dream...
I gave you a chance to redeem

I put my trust in you....
All my hard work you did undo

I scream so loud, my ears go deaf...
And not a single rational thought is left.

Its an uphill stuggle...blood sweat and tears...
You have become everything that embodies my fears

It was easier to say hello than to say goodbye...
Why did you come back and make me wish to die?

Its you that i blame in this deal...
My wounds and torture i can no longer conceal

Once you fooled me - Shame on you.....twice you fooled me - Shame on me....
how did you manage to lead me so blindly
I gave you the knife and you obliged kindly...

Every word you uttered was a stab in my vulnerable heart
To meet was my wish but you always wanted to part..

Separate paths were taken, yet still you cause untold hurt.
I treated you with dignity yet you treated me like dirt...

So with all the hate in my heart I bid thee adieu..
Never will I trust you and never should you...





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Once u fooled me - Shame on you....Twice u fooled me - Shame on me

Contributed by Mangs on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 11:03:21 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Memories condescending....
Why do you bother with your pretending

Strip the mask off....kill the dream...
I gave you a chance to redeem

I put my trust in you....
All my hard work you did undo

I scream so loud, my ears go deaf...
And not a single rational thought is left.

Its an uphill stuggle...blood sweat and tears...
You have become everything that embodies my fears

It was easier to say hello than to say goodbye...
Why did you come back and make me wish to die?

Its you that i blame in this deal...
My wounds and torture i can no longer conceal

Once you fooled me - Shame on you.....twice you fooled me - Shame on me....
how did you manage to lead me so blindly
I gave you the knife and you obliged kindly...

Every word you uttered was a stab in my vulnerable heart
To meet was my wish but you always wanted to part..

Separate paths were taken, yet still you cause untold hurt.
I treated you with dignity yet you treated me like dirt...

So with all the hate in my heart I bid thee adieu..
Never will I trust you and never should you...









Copyright © Mangs ... [ 2004-12-10 11:03:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Once u fooled me - Shame on you....Twice u fooled me - Shame on me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 11:04:20 AM AEST
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that was a brillaint dark collaboration by the pair of you

pixie xx


Re: Once u fooled me - Shame on you....Twice u fooled me - Shame on me (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:30:46 PM AEST
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Hey i really like the few changes you made to a couple of your lines.
They fit alot better......

love always
Stace xx


Re: Once u fooled me - Shame on you....Twice u fooled me - Shame on me (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 04:28:53 PM AEST
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Great job. Both of your thoughts went well together. Nice collaboration.




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