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Array ( [sid] => 75202 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This House Is Not A Home [time] => 2004-12-10 14:46:07 [hometext] => After months of writers' block, I think I may have shook it, please enjoy I've missed YPDC so much. The Phantom [bodytext] => I lie here bleeding, my soul is leaving,
The world is so deceiving, I close myself to all feeling,
Loneliness keeps eating, it's hard to keep breathing,

I wish for a touch, maybe a hug or a kiss, is that too much,
Here I sit staring at the walls, praying they would fall,
My soul has escaped, leaving my body filled with hate,
Loneliness takes hold, I can feel its hand, it's so cold,

As my life passes before my eyes, there's no tomorrow I realize,
I hear a knock on the door, I yell, ' leave, love no longer lives here anymore,"
Was that a mistake, there're so many steps I wish I could retake,
I wish I could go back, but what's the use I've chosen my path,

The sky grows dark, as a sharp pain shoots through my heart,
Memories of love in the distance, I'm left to ponder my decisions,
Did I make the right choice, the thought of your kiss so warm and moist,
My mind is racing, my heart is just chasing,

I replay the moment you walked out of my life, and I contemplate, what it would be like if you were my wife,
But it's too late for that now, I let my pride get in the way of what I needed to say,
So now I cry alone, without love this house is not a home.


Forever Faithful
The Phantom



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This House Is Not A Home

Contributed by The_Phantom on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 02:46:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I lie here bleeding, my soul is leaving,
The world is so deceiving, I close myself to all feeling,
Loneliness keeps eating, it's hard to keep breathing,

I wish for a touch, maybe a hug or a kiss, is that too much,
Here I sit staring at the walls, praying they would fall,
My soul has escaped, leaving my body filled with hate,
Loneliness takes hold, I can feel its hand, it's so cold,

As my life passes before my eyes, there's no tomorrow I realize,
I hear a knock on the door, I yell, ' leave, love no longer lives here anymore,"
Was that a mistake, there're so many steps I wish I could retake,
I wish I could go back, but what's the use I've chosen my path,

The sky grows dark, as a sharp pain shoots through my heart,
Memories of love in the distance, I'm left to ponder my decisions,
Did I make the right choice, the thought of your kiss so warm and moist,
My mind is racing, my heart is just chasing,

I replay the moment you walked out of my life, and I contemplate, what it would be like if you were my wife,
But it's too late for that now, I let my pride get in the way of what I needed to say,
So now I cry alone, without love this house is not a home.


Forever Faithful
The Phantom







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Re: This House Is Not A Home (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:03:44 PM AEST
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Iv missed you so........
Im very sad that your feeling so blue though this is beautiful but so much not like your happy self I hope that this works out and your back with her if possible

Hugs
Michelle


Re: This House Is Not A Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilnn on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:09:41 PM AEST
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Very emotional and beautiful.
So sorry you're so sad
I hope things get better for you soon
take care
eve

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Re: This House Is Not A Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:54:05 PM AEST
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Very sad and heartfelt. Powerful wording really brings your feelings out. Perhaps you can create a happier ending.... or new beginning.

Good write
Willofree


Re: This House Is Not A Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:58:31 PM AEST
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Oh Matt.....I am so happy to see you here once again.... I hope that this is a fictional piece of work. I have missed you so much.
Love and hugs...
Always your friend,
Jenni


Re: This House Is Not A Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 05:08:54 PM AEST
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welcome back -

nice to see such an emotive write - heartfelt.

Thanks for writing


Re: This House Is Not A Home (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:03:40 AM AEST
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yeah I have missed your writes also, I remember you from a couple of months ago, this write was expressed really well, a very sad write, emotionally expressed,

takecare,
pixie xx




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