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Array ( [sid] => 75224 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => As my body shakes [time] => 2004-12-10 17:38:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Alone in my bed, not able to sleep, crying out for the
comfort I find when it's you who I seek. I wonder
where you are and if any sleep you've lost, for
restless nights of slumber seem to be what losing you
has cost. The world with all it's madness is slowly
breaking me down. I don't have the strength to fight
it and its far to late to turn around. I need you
beside me to help me through, but I cant help and
think you are holding someone new. I found a temporay
solution that was to only last a night, but has now
sucked me in and is holding on with all it's might.
I'm terrified to sleep for fear that I might dream, I
hate to wake up to the sounds of my own screams. It's
only you who holding me tonight would be what I needed
to know that everything will soon be right. My body
trembles, it's running low, I try to fight this urge
that won't let me go. I once was strong but now I am
not so sure, I wish that I didnt think that you were
my only cure. Tonight I'll lose the fight once again
as I take a deep breath and let the drugs win. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 352 [topic] => 66 [informant] => jadedtrust [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )
As my body shakes

Contributed by jadedtrust on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 05:38:17 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



Alone in my bed, not able to sleep, crying out for the
comfort I find when it's you who I seek. I wonder
where you are and if any sleep you've lost, for
restless nights of slumber seem to be what losing you
has cost. The world with all it's madness is slowly
breaking me down. I don't have the strength to fight
it and its far to late to turn around. I need you
beside me to help me through, but I cant help and
think you are holding someone new. I found a temporay
solution that was to only last a night, but has now
sucked me in and is holding on with all it's might.
I'm terrified to sleep for fear that I might dream, I
hate to wake up to the sounds of my own screams. It's
only you who holding me tonight would be what I needed
to know that everything will soon be right. My body
trembles, it's running low, I try to fight this urge
that won't let me go. I once was strong but now I am
not so sure, I wish that I didnt think that you were
my only cure. Tonight I'll lose the fight once again
as I take a deep breath and let the drugs win.




Copyright © jadedtrust ... [ 2004-12-10 17:38:17]
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Re: As my body shakes (User Rating: 1 )
by wakegurl77 on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 07:44:25 PM AEST
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Great write
and all i can say is that i hope for you that you wont let the drugs win because my uncle was in a situation much like yours and he didnt make it through. if you over come this whoever it is might come back to you because it is probably the reason they left let that be your motive
Allways Sincere
Leana


Re: As my body shakes (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 11:00:04 PM AEST
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excellent write. i just wish that your poems were formatted to verses and stanzas.


Re: As my body shakes (User Rating: 1 )
by lovesucks on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:20:21 AM AEST
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Fight, Hope




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