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And my pain won't go away
I try to hide from my fears
But it just isn't working
The tears won't stop falling
And it isn't even helping
I try to close my eyes
Take a deep breath
Think happy thoughts
No matter what I do
Nothing is working
The tears won't stop falling
And nothing is helping
Grabbing a tissue
I wipe away some tears
But the tissue just gets soaked
So I close my eyes and count to three
But when I open them up
The tears won't stop falling
And now nothing is helping
I have tried everything
To make them stop
But I don't know what to do
Maybe if I scream out loud
Or throw something threw the air
The tears won't stop falling
Nothing is helping
My pain is aching inside of me
It is hurting so bad and the tears won't stop
I don't know what to do
But my life should be through
The tears won't stop falling
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The Tears Won't Stop Falling

Contributed by unlovedchild on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 01:57:08 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

The tears won't stop falling
And my pain won't go away
I try to hide from my fears
But it just isn't working
The tears won't stop falling
And it isn't even helping
I try to close my eyes
Take a deep breath
Think happy thoughts
No matter what I do
Nothing is working
The tears won't stop falling
And nothing is helping
Grabbing a tissue
I wipe away some tears
But the tissue just gets soaked
So I close my eyes and count to three
But when I open them up
The tears won't stop falling
And now nothing is helping
I have tried everything
To make them stop
But I don't know what to do
Maybe if I scream out loud
Or throw something threw the air
The tears won't stop falling
Nothing is helping
My pain is aching inside of me
It is hurting so bad and the tears won't stop
I don't know what to do
But my life should be through
The tears won't stop falling

Copyright © unlovedchild ... [ 2004-12-11 01:57:08]
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Re: The Tears Won't Stop Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:40:32 AM AEST
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i really like the repetition i like this write lots

i cant seem to cry these days

Re: The Tears Won't Stop Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 05:51:37 AM AEST
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Amy this is so sad very emotional, your poems has been making me tear a lot. The emotions that you put in are so deep. it really is such a good poem.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: The Tears Won't Stop Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:54:57 AM AEST
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awww so very sad and emotional, *hands you tissues*

pixie xx

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