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having to stress and fight
with emotions that are held in so deep.
Between shadows of a bruised heart, they creep.
Day after day a girl lives this so called life in lies,
because through that smile is a girls that cries.
And night after night tears soaking her pillow
as she faces the the fact that no one will ever know.
They'll never realized the pain she suffers.
They will only be left to wonder
Wonder and ponder upon what might happen to her.
But as I am that "girl" i know with each tear I cry
limits my hours til the rest of me will die.

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Secretive Tears

Contributed by Artemis03 on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:41:38 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Do you know what it's like
having to stress and fight
with emotions that are held in so deep.
Between shadows of a bruised heart, they creep.
Day after day a girl lives this so called life in lies,
because through that smile is a girls that cries.
And night after night tears soaking her pillow
as she faces the the fact that no one will ever know.
They'll never realized the pain she suffers.
They will only be left to wonder
Wonder and ponder upon what might happen to her.
But as I am that "girl" i know with each tear I cry
limits my hours til the rest of me will die.

Copyright © Artemis03 ... [ 2004-12-11 18:41:38]
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Re: Secretive Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:43:58 PM AEST
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You know gurl your poetry is always beautiful and I can REALLY relate....you hear some of my poems. Luv ya tootz.

Re: Secretive Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:46:52 PM AEST
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nicely written..i like this alot and i can relate very well. good job.

Re: Secretive Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Black_Rose on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 09:00:22 PM AEST
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beautiful

Re: Secretive Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by redtempest13 on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:31:45 PM AEST
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I can really relate to that. Deffinately don't stop writing. To stop would be wasting a wonderful talent.

Re: Secretive Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 03:57:43 AM AEST
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How sad but owh how beautiful. What a touching little write that moved me. Very gripping. However don't despair as many people have many a sad moment & they often disguise their face with a smile each day.

Very well worded. Excellent write & I enjoyed it immensely!

Please keep them coming!

Your fellow poet
Corinna

Re: Secretive Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by worldsenigma on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 11:52:23 AM AEST
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wow thats really deep...i love it...i wish i were that good!!! You captured your emotions realy well nicely done!

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