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Array ( [sid] => 75464 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I could love you one day [time] => 2004-12-12 16:57:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => How can you describe something with all your honesty?
Verbalize feelings and emotions that are a still a mystery?
Lies are the easy way out, “Yes, I love you or at least I want to.”
Would you prefer that reply or simply want to hear what’s true?

I do want to get to know you but I’m terribly afraid,
Love is simply something my heart always tries to evade,
Things are even more difficult with the age difference,
That’s why I am so mistrustful so filled with prudence

I did get some weird thoughts of moonlight, sand and oceans,
But the clouds always arrive and the atmosphere always darkens,
You’d probably better be off without me, but it isn’t easy to let you go,
It’s selfish and cruel to tell you don’t go, but I can’t understand this sorrow.

Sorry for causing you so much troubles, for hurting you with my mistrust,
I’m a conservative and never did try to raise already long settled dust,
I should throw caution into the wind and forget what happened in the past,
Am tempted to do just that, but what guarantees I have that the love would last? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 55 [informant] => necromant [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
I could love you one day

Contributed by necromant on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 04:57:24 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



How can you describe something with all your honesty?
Verbalize feelings and emotions that are a still a mystery?
Lies are the easy way out, “Yes, I love you or at least I want to.”
Would you prefer that reply or simply want to hear what’s true?

I do want to get to know you but I’m terribly afraid,
Love is simply something my heart always tries to evade,
Things are even more difficult with the age difference,
That’s why I am so mistrustful so filled with prudence

I did get some weird thoughts of moonlight, sand and oceans,
But the clouds always arrive and the atmosphere always darkens,
You’d probably better be off without me, but it isn’t easy to let you go,
It’s selfish and cruel to tell you don’t go, but I can’t understand this sorrow.

Sorry for causing you so much troubles, for hurting you with my mistrust,
I’m a conservative and never did try to raise already long settled dust,
I should throw caution into the wind and forget what happened in the past,
Am tempted to do just that, but what guarantees I have that the love would last?




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Re: I could love you one day (User Rating: 1 )
by Summerwine on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:18:46 PM AEST
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great write...I totally understand being afraid to love, but love is a journey on the road of life and we must follow where it leads, and put aside the fears, and just enjoy the trip... Yvonne


Re: I could love you one day (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 10:20:11 AM AEST
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wow! that was something great write.

Johnny.



Re: I could love you one day (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 02:06:30 AM AEST
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Very good writing and so wise.
A masterpeice as we all get scared sometimes.
huggs,
emy




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