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Array ( [sid] => 75478 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Blood [time] => 2004-12-12 18:18:04 [hometext] => Please read and comment! [bodytext] => Watch the blood stain my body
The wondrous crimson drops
Dripping down forever
I won’t let them stop

The blood will never leave me
Like everything else in my life
It will always flow through my veins
All I need is my metallic knife

Whenever I am sad
And I need a helping hand
All I need is my little blade
And my blood will understand

It’s there for me in darkness
It’s there for me in light
It doesn’t matter when it is
It makes everything feel all right

My crimson red obsession
Will be there until the end
No matter what I’m going through
It will always be my friend [comments] => 9 [counter] => 608 [topic] => 13 [informant] => CrimsonTears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Blood

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:18:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Watch the blood stain my body
The wondrous crimson drops
Dripping down forever
I won’t let them stop

The blood will never leave me
Like everything else in my life
It will always flow through my veins
All I need is my metallic knife

Whenever I am sad
And I need a helping hand
All I need is my little blade
And my blood will understand

It’s there for me in darkness
It’s there for me in light
It doesn’t matter when it is
It makes everything feel all right

My crimson red obsession
Will be there until the end
No matter what I’m going through
It will always be my friend

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-12-12 18:18:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by the_fallen on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:21:55 PM AEST
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one word, wow

Re: The Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:30:07 PM AEST
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incredible description and wording, great poem*

Re: The Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:33:45 PM AEST
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Let the blood flow from within me let me bleed my fears away. Words of a true cutter. Words that cut even deeper than a knife. Great write.

~DENNIS~

Re: The Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:39:10 PM AEST
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I love this poem with a passion and I can really feel what your going through. Feel free to talk whenever.

Re: The Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by blackholesun on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:48:39 PM AEST
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i really liked it!is that a good thing?i feel the same way you do,no one but a cutter will understand a cutter evryone else will tell you to stop and loose your comfort,ur blood your only friend,i know how that is and i feel sorry for you because of the pain not cuz your solution to it,i hope what ive said means something to you.if someone told me that cutting is an ok way to survive this life i would deeply respect them,love,peace&a rozor for us both!plz come read my new poem and comment on it its called ***** you if you dont like me!

Re: The Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by athena on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:01:03 PM AEST
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::speachless:: (wow great poem)
*athena

Re: The Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:22:44 PM AEST
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absolutely amazing. And so true...it is a comfort. I know the feeling...pm me sometime or something.

Re: The Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:14:50 AM AEST
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an amazing dark write, great flow,

pixie xx

Re: The Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by setting_in_the_sun on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:36:29 PM AEST
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Same way I feel about it, beautiful heart filled peice, I understand yah all the way. Great job-

Stephanie @}---

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