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Array ( [sid] => 75484 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forgotten [time] => 2004-12-12 18:46:25 [hometext] => This is more contemporary than traditional. (No real rhyme scheme) [bodytext] => A girl is sitting in the night;
Can you see her? Can you feel her
Freeze? The night is blackened by her pain,
The skies are clouded with her death.
She makes no sounds, utters no protest;
Simply watches as he kills her once more,
One last time.
And now, what remains but night?
Night, faithful companion to her dying die.
The heavy darkness folds around her, closing her in,
Protecting her.
And in death's friendly hand, her soul is forever enclosed. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Black_Rose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Forgotten

Contributed by Black_Rose on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:46:25 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

A girl is sitting in the night;
Can you see her? Can you feel her
Freeze? The night is blackened by her pain,
The skies are clouded with her death.
She makes no sounds, utters no protest;
Simply watches as he kills her once more,
One last time.
And now, what remains but night?
Night, faithful companion to her dying die.
The heavy darkness folds around her, closing her in,
Protecting her.
And in death's friendly hand, her soul is forever enclosed.

Copyright © Black_Rose ... [ 2004-12-12 18:46:25]
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Re: Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:03:27 PM AEST
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awesome write!! gives you an erie feeling.. its terrible when people have to be sad..

Peace and hope
JENNI

Re: Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:08:31 PM AEST
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Intense write

~DENNIS~

Re: Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:30:26 PM AEST
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Incredible and very very passionate.

Re: Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:37:24 PM AEST
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awesome, i love it!!! well done!

Re: Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:13:33 PM AEST
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This is a speachless write, very powerful,
I really enjoyed reading this, Gread Write !!!!!!

Re: Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:14:47 PM AEST
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Sorry i ment to say * Great Write *

Re: Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by hot-shot on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:11:30 AM AEST
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hmmm.....beautiful its really wonderful...
Love..
hav fun & hugzzzzzz
hot-shot

Re: Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:13:22 AM AEST
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that was brilliant, great poem,

pixie xx

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