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Array ( [sid] => 75530 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Taken away by love...... [time] => 2004-12-13 01:51:04 [hometext] => random thoughts...... [bodytext] => A silver lining has engulfed me
and tossed me into the water of the deepest sea
and yet I can still feel my body and sense my soul

Damnation no longer is wedged into my thoughts
but instead I have been released from the physical limitations place upon me

Crystals seem to glisten from within my eyes
and show you my illuminated soul

They pierce you as if they are arrows
stabbing thru your heart
and yet you feel no pain
but only pleasure as your worries have been whisked away from your troubled soul

And the reality that was is no longer
and time has no meaning
and everything that ever was is nothing

words no longer are the essence of communication
but instead the thoughts of empathy that are emitted from your inner self

beneath your flesh and mine laid a tormented soul
that has just been set free by the angels from above

and just for now everything means nothing
as i am reminded that there is no reality
and there is no real existance
only you and me
and the silver lining that has embraced us
and has shown us the right way....

. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 299 [topic] => 2 [informant] => JennyFruFru [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Taken away by love......

Contributed by JennyFruFru on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:51:04 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



A silver lining has engulfed me
and tossed me into the water of the deepest sea
and yet I can still feel my body and sense my soul

Damnation no longer is wedged into my thoughts
but instead I have been released from the physical limitations place upon me

Crystals seem to glisten from within my eyes
and show you my illuminated soul

They pierce you as if they are arrows
stabbing thru your heart
and yet you feel no pain
but only pleasure as your worries have been whisked away from your troubled soul

And the reality that was is no longer
and time has no meaning
and everything that ever was is nothing

words no longer are the essence of communication
but instead the thoughts of empathy that are emitted from your inner self

beneath your flesh and mine laid a tormented soul
that has just been set free by the angels from above

and just for now everything means nothing
as i am reminded that there is no reality
and there is no real existance
only you and me
and the silver lining that has embraced us
and has shown us the right way....

.




Copyright © JennyFruFru ... [ 2004-12-13 01:51:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Taken away by love...... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:58:28 AM AEST
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Very beautifull masterpeice of luv.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Taken away by love...... (User Rating: 1 )
by positivelypurple on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:14:55 AM AEST
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Deep...dark...and beautiful!

-Laurel


Re: Taken away by love...... (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:58:23 PM AEST
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GIRL,THAT WAS PRETTY! BUT THEN AGAIN YOU'RE A VERY PRETTY GIRL!! IT WAS STRAIGHT TO THE HEART WITH NO END,JUST LIKE THE START OF YOU BEING MY SWEET LITTLE FRIEND!!!

Lot Of Love,
DAN!!!!


Re: Taken away by love...... (User Rating: 1 )
by abelveal on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 01:49:48 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this piece. Your description of what takes place between the subtlties of a single glance between two people was rather thought provoking. Great job, keep it up. Looking forward to your next post.

Adam




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