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Array ( [sid] => 75533 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gone [time] => 2004-12-13 02:13:36 [hometext] => There is awesome power in finally moving on..... [bodytext] => It is now time to move on
The power you once had over me
Is gone.
The weakness I once possessed
Has dissolved as light unto
Darkness.
The taste of you has been erased
Along with the humiliation
I once faced.
Goodbye emptiness
Goodbye pain
Goodbye loser
Goodbye blame.
It has taken me too long to see
That never were you worthy
Of me.
Never were you deserving
Of my weeks wondering, writing,
Thinking, wishing, cursing.
Selfish man without a soul,
Good riddance now
I am finally back in control.

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Gone

Contributed by positivelypurple on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:13:36 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It is now time to move on
The power you once had over me
Is gone.
The weakness I once possessed
Has dissolved as light unto
Darkness.
The taste of you has been erased
Along with the humiliation
I once faced.
Goodbye emptiness
Goodbye pain
Goodbye loser
Goodbye blame.
It has taken me too long to see
That never were you worthy
Of me.
Never were you deserving
Of my weeks wondering, writing,
Thinking, wishing, cursing.
Selfish man without a soul,
Good riddance now
I am finally back in control.

Copyright © positivelypurple ... [ 2004-12-13 02:13:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:26:01 AM AEST
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wish i was as strong as you ........

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 04:00:01 AM AEST
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Wow now, this is a masterepice and triumph to.
Time for celebration for sure.
I'll never 4 get when I realized I was over my last ex.
Awesome and ya get five brite shinning stars from me.
luv, huggs, celebrate,
emy

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:05:40 AM AEST
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Saying goodbye is a hard thing for some, but with you seem to celebrate it and thats a good thing. Great poem.

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Black_Rose on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:32:10 PM AEST
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I can't wait until I'm at the stage that you are. Someday hopefully, though.... Wonderful poem; it brought a little bit of hope into my world. If you can do it, then maybe I can too.

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 07:12:06 PM AEST
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Awesomne write! Moving on really does feel great. You deserve better :-)

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