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Array ( [sid] => 75639 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => second to last [time] => 2004-12-13 18:33:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The throbbing of my ragged heart
Will not subside
I was lead to believe everything
Was going according to plan
Suppose the second I blinked
You changed your loves path

I had no scheme in what to do with myself
As far as I knew
You were my paramount
Hopes and imaginings weaken
I can’t face this day
Mend my broken heart

Your tone burnt to the ground
Stumbling to say a few terms
Nothing is the same
Oh how you damaged me
From such lies you believed
Betraying me

Sick to my stomach
No more tears to snivel
I hardly know you
You portrayed the worst of you
Bringing me to my knees
Tell me this is madness

Madness
Yes, so it may seem
I don’t know where to go
What to say, at the end of this day
My slow crawl
Is keeping me away from you

Betrayed
My plan ends a war with me
There is nothing left to steal
You should be proud
Isn’t it strange
How time will not support my truth

Smiles stand still on your face
But it’s not too late for me
Now it’s gone, can we start again, start anew
Will it follow us back down
Can it go through life without a frown
A distance, a well worn path

Don’t accept the blame
I would not complain
Cause I’m sure it wasn’t your own fault
That you never mad it out your vault
Just unlock the door and find some time
To refine yourself

I’m giving you my last straw
The shortest one of all
You gave me the greatest gift of all
You set me free
You gave me your own amends
Another life to keep

Let’s make this a happy ending
Keep my by your side
Standing within your eyes
I have made second plans
Bigger and better then the previous
And I plan to keep them




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second to last

Contributed by neglected1 on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:33:47 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



The throbbing of my ragged heart
Will not subside
I was lead to believe everything
Was going according to plan
Suppose the second I blinked
You changed your loves path

I had no scheme in what to do with myself
As far as I knew
You were my paramount
Hopes and imaginings weaken
I can’t face this day
Mend my broken heart

Your tone burnt to the ground
Stumbling to say a few terms
Nothing is the same
Oh how you damaged me
From such lies you believed
Betraying me

Sick to my stomach
No more tears to snivel
I hardly know you
You portrayed the worst of you
Bringing me to my knees
Tell me this is madness

Madness
Yes, so it may seem
I don’t know where to go
What to say, at the end of this day
My slow crawl
Is keeping me away from you

Betrayed
My plan ends a war with me
There is nothing left to steal
You should be proud
Isn’t it strange
How time will not support my truth

Smiles stand still on your face
But it’s not too late for me
Now it’s gone, can we start again, start anew
Will it follow us back down
Can it go through life without a frown
A distance, a well worn path

Don’t accept the blame
I would not complain
Cause I’m sure it wasn’t your own fault
That you never mad it out your vault
Just unlock the door and find some time
To refine yourself

I’m giving you my last straw
The shortest one of all
You gave me the greatest gift of all
You set me free
You gave me your own amends
Another life to keep

Let’s make this a happy ending
Keep my by your side
Standing within your eyes
I have made second plans
Bigger and better then the previous
And I plan to keep them








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