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Love Me For Once Please
Contributed by
unlovedchild
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:32:18 PM in AEST
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I know you don't love me
So don't act like you care
It won't make me feel better
You are only doing it for you
Not one feeling of love do you let seep through
Who am I to love then
If you aren't around
We are supposed to love each other
By birth this was bound
Now I am left here with you next to me
Never one word do you ever speak
I feel lost and lonely
Like you don't want me here
What I am to do
When you don't tell me
It is really hard to read
What someone doesn't say
Help me out a little
Tell me what to do
Something that will make you care
Don't do it for you
Because you will feel guilty if you don't
Please for once
Do something for me
Make me feel loved
No matter how long it lasts
One little moment will feel like
Eternity to me
Copyright ©
unlovedchild
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2004-12-13 21:32:18]
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Re: Love Me For Once Please
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:00:25 PM AEST
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| i liked this and how it was written. made me think of a lot of things such as my life having to do with it and songs i listen to all of the time. |
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Re: Love Me For Once Please
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:08:44 PM AEST
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that was really great and sad...i feel exactly the same way as you and the way guys only pretend to care to get something out of it. there is nothing worse than rejection and not knowing where u stand. well done
luv rachxxxxxx
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Re: Love Me For Once Please
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:23:12 PM AEST
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aww awesome write sis and a great job in expression.. some people are just selfish and that don't mean your unlovable.. they don't even love themselves therefore they can't love anyone else.. pray for them to get healed and realize sometimes GOd works wonders.. you will get past this hard time too .. you are a strong person
Peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: Love Me For Once Please
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:58:17 PM AEST
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| This is really a good poem |
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Re: Love Me For Once Please
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:37:00 AM AEST
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so very emotional and deep, this was written well, I can feel your pain through this write,
*hugs* takecare hun, you are such a sweetie you know
pixie xx |
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