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The Captive
Contributed by
Ada
on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 02:10:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Caged in four corners, locked up in sorrow
I no longer await for tommorrow
Darkness consumes the only light I hold
To the devil my soul has long been sold
What is to regret? Nothing's left for me
Long have I been robbed of my dignity
I am confused, not knowing who to blame
Through the years I have been put to great shame
Is God to blame for the massive error,
Of creating man, who sins with fervor?
Violence spreads across this sinful earth
Peace surely is in extinction and dearth
Youth wasted in the shallowest of deep
From the once slow, every pace seems to leap,
Out of what was good, to the wrong doing
I ask, where is everybody going?
Fortunate I am, to be in this cell
Locked from the world and from the true hell
Caged in four corners, locked up in sorrow
The world awaits for God's heavenly glow
Copyright ©
Ada
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2004-12-14 02:10:49]
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Re: The Captive
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by LEMMEN on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 07:55:54 AM AEST
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Very well written GREAT JOB.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: The Captive
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by Stonedraider23 on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 08:33:32 PM AEST
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| good write i always wait for tomorrow cuz today sucks |
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Re: The Captive
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:33:33 PM AEST
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| Wow! That is a great poem. |
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