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Array ( [sid] => 75702 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Vampire [time] => 2004-12-14 07:18:04 [hometext] => The thoughts in my awakening.... [bodytext] => The kiss of death,
the immortal touch,
the life of darkness,
the dangerous kiss.
They wander further into darkness,
as their fate is made,
to live eternally in night,
they hunt for our blood,
craving it, wanting it, needing it,
they survive on us, they could not live without us,
the energy we give to them allows them to prosper.
So in the end, if they are human, or immortal,
they are still considered a predator,
an energy drinker.
Fascinating people they are.
My love for them is strong,
my heart beats faster as I think of them,
studying them at such a young age,
lust consumes my body when I dream of them,
I love them with all my heart,
people who think that they aren’t real,
are wrong,
they exist, they are human like us,
they are immortal in the sense of rebirth,
I long to be touched by them ,
I long to be with one.
Suddenly I realize as I read,
things I have in common with them,
things I believe and feel and need,
all just like them.

I now realize my awakening....... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 62 [informant] => givingin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )
Vampire

Contributed by givingin on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:18:04 AM in AEST
Topic: spiritual



The kiss of death,
the immortal touch,
the life of darkness,
the dangerous kiss.
They wander further into darkness,
as their fate is made,
to live eternally in night,
they hunt for our blood,
craving it, wanting it, needing it,
they survive on us, they could not live without us,
the energy we give to them allows them to prosper.
So in the end, if they are human, or immortal,
they are still considered a predator,
an energy drinker.
Fascinating people they are.
My love for them is strong,
my heart beats faster as I think of them,
studying them at such a young age,
lust consumes my body when I dream of them,
I love them with all my heart,
people who think that they aren’t real,
are wrong,
they exist, they are human like us,
they are immortal in the sense of rebirth,
I long to be touched by them ,
I long to be with one.
Suddenly I realize as I read,
things I have in common with them,
things I believe and feel and need,
all just like them.

I now realize my awakening.......




Copyright © givingin ... [ 2004-12-14 07:18:04]
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Re: Vampire (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:19:45 AM AEST
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wow that was amazingly written, a great write,
pixie xx


Re: Vampire (User Rating: 1 )
by Sapphire_Blue on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:48:15 AM AEST
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Beautifully written though not all true, oh they exist...but they dont need us to survive...but that is for you to find out.
so vivid and powerful very intense wording...sensual in a way...an amazing write.


Re: Vampire (User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 12:32:33 PM AEST
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Very good write .. its a veiw on vampires i never seen before ..


Re: Vampire (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 02:37:54 PM AEST
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Excellent
You style is unique
and
I'm sorry I haven't been more attentive.....




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