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Ill always be better because you are so few!!
You are just a heartbreaker, you are nothing at all
You made me beg, You made me fall!!!
I cannot take this pain anymore
The damage you did went straight to the core
You laugh and joke about how lame i sound
When i tell the story of love id found
All those poems ive wrote for you
Dont mean ***** now that were through
I still cant believe i wasted these times
On your silly life, On these Silly rhymes
Even though were totally through
i Still write these cappy damn poems about you
But the words have changed, there all jumbeld up
Cut all my veins, make a blood filled cup!!
I wrote on school tables.. i wrote your damn name
When i think of you now, things just arnt the same!!
So im starting a new, im moving away
You wont hear from me after this dark day!!!
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CANT YOU UNDERATAND!!! Your KILLING ME!!

Contributed by punkpoet on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:20:46 AM in AEST
Topic: hbadday



I think you know, im strong then you
Ill always be better because you are so few!!
You are just a heartbreaker, you are nothing at all
You made me beg, You made me fall!!!
I cannot take this pain anymore
The damage you did went straight to the core
You laugh and joke about how lame i sound
When i tell the story of love id found
All those poems ive wrote for you
Dont mean ***** now that were through
I still cant believe i wasted these times
On your silly life, On these Silly rhymes
Even though were totally through
i Still write these cappy damn poems about you
But the words have changed, there all jumbeld up
Cut all my veins, make a blood filled cup!!
I wrote on school tables.. i wrote your damn name
When i think of you now, things just arnt the same!!
So im starting a new, im moving away
You wont hear from me after this dark day!!!




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Re: CANT YOU UNDERATAND!!! Your KILLING ME!! (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:32:34 AM AEST
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Very sad and powerful,
great write!

*~givingin~*


Re: CANT YOU UNDERATAND!!! Your KILLING ME!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:40:52 AM AEST
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very powerful,
very realistic...
time wasted on somebody who you once cared for,
time that you cant earn back...
I hope that you get over her, and what she had done to you...

*hugs n' kisses*

*~Alicia~*


Re: CANT YOU UNDERATAND!!! Your KILLING ME!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Sapphire_Blue on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:44:55 AM AEST
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So much strength and inner feeling, you gave this person your all and it was spat back in your face...glad you are moving on time to find someone else who loves oyu not treats you like thus...totally full home write...showing true feeling and letting loose...liked your words.




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