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Clouds of darkness

Float through my head

Droplet's of death shower
my soul

For my life is empty
just like a hole

The sun has not showed
her face since
I was ten years old

My days have been so dark
only GOD knows

Can't seem to wake
from this dark life of mine

Showers of blood flow
from my flesh
as I bleed out the pain
of life

And look forward to the day
all of my blood has gone
away

Living in madness is
normal to me just wish
I could see the light shine
Down on me

No where to run

No where to hide

All i can do is just
bleed inside and out

As my tears of blood

CRY
FOR
HELP

By Dennis Lemmen
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 13 [informant] => LEMMEN [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

THE DARKNESS

Contributed by LEMMEN on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:25:47 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The rain has come but once again

Clouds of darkness

Float through my head

Droplet's of death shower
my soul

For my life is empty
just like a hole

The sun has not showed
her face since
I was ten years old

My days have been so dark
only GOD knows

Can't seem to wake
from this dark life of mine

Showers of blood flow
from my flesh
as I bleed out the pain
of life

And look forward to the day
all of my blood has gone
away

Living in madness is
normal to me just wish
I could see the light shine
Down on me

No where to run

No where to hide

All i can do is just
bleed inside and out

As my tears of blood

CRY
FOR
HELP

By Dennis Lemmen

Copyright © LEMMEN ... [ 2004-12-14 19:25:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: THE DARKNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:39:51 PM AEST
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I really had to comment on this poem because it was so beautiful in so many ways that it really touched my heart and soul. I know exactly the kind of pain you are feeling.

Re: THE DARKNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:21:52 AM AEST
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This was a great write!
Beautifully writen!

I loved this, so heart filled, so emotional, so sad.
One of the best poems I've read.

Great job DENNIS

MUAH

*~givingin~*

Re: THE DARKNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by Artemis03 on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:13:50 PM AEST
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Your poem defined the way I feel in many ways. I felt it so much that I could sit here and cry b/c it makes me think of everything that causes me pain. Very touching write.

Re: THE DARKNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by witch_derna on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:10:18 PM AEST
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I hope I bring some comfort to you. True we both have our pains but we just need to turn to each other. Sad but beautiful write.
Love, MaDonna

Re: THE DARKNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 11:22:01 AM AEST
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Brillant. Dennis this poem is so beautifully written and I felt the emotions that were put into this poem.

~ :: christina :: ~

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