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Array ( [sid] => 75822 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my pain for your love [time] => 2004-12-14 21:22:26 [hometext] => Comments please <3 ....not sure about it..or the title heh [bodytext] => Tonight I'll paint myself in black and blue
Lift up my skirt reveal a wound or two..
Carved your name into my chest, you whispered "I heart you" but not a single protest
You told me once you loved my laugh, but liked it best when I'd scream
Well here I ' am bleeding on the bathroom floor singing are song into your machine.
I hope your really happy...
I hope you know how much this hurts
I hope you ***** choke on every single word
I didn't mean that darling...its just your slowly killing me...
Can't you see I only aim to please? [comments] => 6 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 13 [informant] => emocutie07 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

my pain for your love

Contributed by emocutie07 on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:22:26 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Tonight I'll paint myself in black and blue
Lift up my skirt reveal a wound or two..
Carved your name into my chest, you whispered "I heart you" but not a single protest
You told me once you loved my laugh, but liked it best when I'd scream
Well here I ' am bleeding on the bathroom floor singing are song into your machine.
I hope your really happy...
I hope you know how much this hurts
I hope you ***** choke on every single word
I didn't mean that darling...its just your slowly killing me...
Can't you see I only aim to please?

Copyright © emocutie07 ... [ 2004-12-14 21:22:26]
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Re: my pain for your love (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:38:21 PM AEST
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powerful write.

Re: my pain for your love (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:33:07 AM AEST
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A cute short poem, written so beautifuly. It has a nice flow to it. Good Job

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: my pain for your love (User Rating: 1 )
by Artemis03 on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:08:35 PM AEST
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Very deep, emotional, and so very beautiful.

Re: my pain for your love (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:13:19 PM AEST
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Well, I really hope you aren't talking about me...cuz if I'm doing this to you, I had no clue, and it wasn't intentional...other than that, it was very good...

Eternally Yours
Mason

Re: my pain for your love (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 11:27:34 PM AEST
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this is like stepping into a trauma ward. bloody and violent yet tragic and emotional.i hope this wasn't anything caused by a close loved one.(hint hint), awww who am i kidding mason doesn't have it in him to hurt another human being. besides he loves you to much, your all he ever talks about!!!!!! hope you find your peace.

Re: my pain for your love (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 07:06:48 PM AEST
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I swear I didn't put Dane up to that ^^

Love you
Mason

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