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Array ( [sid] => 75886 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wait And Bleed [time] => 2004-12-15 13:09:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm a self mutalist
the scars I bear
You don't have to look hard
to know that they are there

But who would cut themselves
just for fun?
Or are they just reminders
of a game never won?

My scars represent
part of what I feel
Painful reminders
when they heal

I hurt myself,
another fresh cut
As each new wound opens,
another door to my heart is shut

I use them as a reminder
never to try
Because everytime I fail
I just want to die

Another fresh cut,
strait across the chest
This one finishes
the work of the rest

No one thought I'd die
they never took heed
Dying, I laugh at them,
As I wait and bleed [comments] => 3 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 36 [informant] => crash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Wait And Bleed

Contributed by crash on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 01:09:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I'm a self mutalist
the scars I bear
You don't have to look hard
to know that they are there

But who would cut themselves
just for fun?
Or are they just reminders
of a game never won?

My scars represent
part of what I feel
Painful reminders
when they heal

I hurt myself,
another fresh cut
As each new wound opens,
another door to my heart is shut

I use them as a reminder
never to try
Because everytime I fail
I just want to die

Another fresh cut,
strait across the chest
This one finishes
the work of the rest

No one thought I'd die
they never took heed
Dying, I laugh at them,
As I wait and bleed

Copyright © crash ... [ 2004-12-15 13:09:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Wait And Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by xfrozenwindx on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 01:28:21 PM AEST
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Wow! That is sad but such a good write. Hope you don't feel this way....
-Ashley

Re: Wait And Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by Chaos_is_apon_us on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:49:56 PM AEST
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Going through all of your fntastic poetry, I am shocked that one man, not even 18 yet, could ever feel such pain. I feel this poem though, I have been there myself.
Better dayz
~jace~

Re: Wait And Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 08:08:48 PM AEST
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I really feel for you. Im a self mutilator myself and I know what you are going through. I want to give you a hug but as long as you have friends, you will get through this.

Hang in there,
Jillian

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