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Array ( [sid] => 75946 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fading Reflection [time] => 2004-12-15 19:36:42 [hometext] => My poem tells about a girl who's reflection fades right before her eyes. [bodytext] => Looking into my reflection
I see a girl with so many questions.
Curiosity upon her face
On the other side, I stand in her place.

So much of her to explore,
and beyond this sad face is yet much more.
More than what you see everyday.
Pass the moon lite rays
in her eyes are the echos of loney cries.
I feel that she is slowly, internally, she dying.

She says to me, "My life is so confusing,
people find my pain amusing."
I whisper back, "I know what it's like
having to surivive day to day with a stuggle and fight."

Suddenly, holding up to her wrist
she whispers to me, "Make a wish."
Silent in shock, she falls to her death
Now seeing no reflection not even my breath
nothing but the message the she left.
"I wish to die...
So the world, instead of me, will cry."






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Fading Reflection

Contributed by Artemis03 on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:36:42 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Looking into my reflection
I see a girl with so many questions.
Curiosity upon her face
On the other side, I stand in her place.

So much of her to explore,
and beyond this sad face is yet much more.
More than what you see everyday.
Pass the moon lite rays
in her eyes are the echos of loney cries.
I feel that she is slowly, internally, she dying.

She says to me, "My life is so confusing,
people find my pain amusing."
I whisper back, "I know what it's like
having to surivive day to day with a stuggle and fight."

Suddenly, holding up to her wrist
she whispers to me, "Make a wish."
Silent in shock, she falls to her death
Now seeing no reflection not even my breath
nothing but the message the she left.
"I wish to die...
So the world, instead of me, will cry."










Copyright © Artemis03 ... [ 2004-12-15 19:36:42]
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Re: Fading Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by athena on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:49:18 PM AEST
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::gasp:: o my god...
its beautiful...really...
we share so many feelings
its strange...very very beautiful
write....
*athena


Re: Fading Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:06:51 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful.....one of the best ive ever read......its so deep and sad..well written.

xxUmang.xx


Re: Fading Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:27:35 PM AEST
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Oh! This is your best yet and I love the last verse. Excellent.


Re: Fading Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:48:38 PM AEST
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Aye, very nice. I especially like the 3rd stanza. Great job! (^_^)v


Re: Fading Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:59:53 PM AEST
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Good poem-
Very well versed-
One must seek themself out by looking beyond mear mortal flesh and into the soul-
Joe


Re: Fading Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 10:28:13 PM AEST
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well done.


Re: Fading Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 10:36:41 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed this....great write....excellent job...u ahve a talent

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: Fading Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by AKA_Anonymous on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:00:28 PM AEST
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Wow, that poem is very deep... You are a very talented poet.


Re: Fading Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 04:06:23 AM AEST
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Now that was truly breathtaking! I'm speechless & utterly lost for words. Absolutely sensational. Am so glad one stuck around. What talent one has, hang on to it, it's your gift & how well you use it. That was a masterpiece. Very capturing & moving.

Excellent, just beautiful. Very enjoyable read.
Lovely.....lovely.....lovely.
5/5
Keep submitting please.

Corinna


Re: Fading Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:28:48 AM AEST
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Truly well written. Good job. :)




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