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Array ( [sid] => 75986 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => never enough [time] => 2004-12-16 03:01:55 [hometext] => i was gonna go into some other experiences, some other people i've left behind.....but i don't have the strength. oh, if you want to read this without the lil stars just let me know and i'll email it to you(it seems to take a bit of the power away) [bodytext] => So i sit here in front of this screen
and i write and i write
and i write
and there are faces surrounding me
faces I left behind
so long ago

this is for you john
what a brother should be
a friend a dead end
dead beat junkie love
this is for you john
your lost cause
your calamity

do you still blame me
john?
Heaven's singing in
your veins
do you still blame me
i sat and watched and
smiled your sickness
and you blamed me
what a friend should be
john a dead beat
dead end brotherly love

and this is for you liz
my darling my torture
my end
i called you whore
i called you *****
and *****
and argued love
yet you sat with me
and held me
when i cried

do you still blame yourself
it was my wrist and my knife
my scar my blood
in your car
your pencil my poetry
you kept for all of these years

this is for you liz
what love should be
a morning and a kiss
the mountains and the
desert sun

it is never enough. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 48 [informant] => iodinelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
never enough

Contributed by iodinelove on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 03:01:55 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



So i sit here in front of this screen
and i write and i write
and i write
and there are faces surrounding me
faces I left behind
so long ago

this is for you john
what a brother should be
a friend a dead end
dead beat junkie love
this is for you john
your lost cause
your calamity

do you still blame me
john?
Heaven's singing in
your veins
do you still blame me
i sat and watched and
smiled your sickness
and you blamed me
what a friend should be
john a dead beat
dead end brotherly love

and this is for you liz
my darling my torture
my end
i called you whore
i called you *****
and *****
and argued love
yet you sat with me
and held me
when i cried

do you still blame yourself
it was my wrist and my knife
my scar my blood
in your car
your pencil my poetry
you kept for all of these years

this is for you liz
what love should be
a morning and a kiss
the mountains and the
desert sun

it is never enough.




Copyright © iodinelove ... [ 2004-12-16 03:01:55]
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Re: never enough (User Rating: 1 )
by Sapphire_Blue on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 04:34:28 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, though to me it is showing alot in the way of confused love...wanting to help yet, fearing to get envovled.
Awesome poem, well worth the read...with or without the stars.....


Re: never enough (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 06:03:55 AM AEST
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a very sad and pained write,
pixie xx


Re: never enough (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on Wednesday, 24th November 2010 @ 01:46:45 PM AEST
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No matter the poem, you always convey the needed emotion to make it great. I know how all of this feels. I've been in many dark places and many inadequate moments, but it also has made me more of a person that I really needed to be. Sometimes never enough is already too much.... Good job!




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