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one less too many
Contributed by
wil_ca
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Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 05:45:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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one less bottle of bocardi lays unshattered
one less heart of love remains unbroken
one less star in the sky shines bright
too many things were left unsaid
too many memories i keep in the back of my head
too many times i regret
too many things that i want to forget
too many nights you weren't there
too many times when i thought you just didnt care
too many days left wondering on what to do
too many days wasted thinking about you
too many dreams
all of them broken
just because of the nightmare, that couldnt be awoken
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2002-11-28 05:45:54]
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Re: one less too many
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by OreO on
Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 09:44:07 PM AEST
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I like this one and your right
it is snazzy. Thanks for sharing it
I think my favorite line is the last one
where it says just because of the
nightmare, that couldn't be awoken
It's absolutely beautiful. I enjoyed it
.::��`�..� OreO�..���`::. |
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