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Array ( [sid] => 75997 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sorrows tears bleed [time] => 2004-12-16 07:49:02 [hometext] => Something I wrote tonight, seems a really sad but short poem, just came to mind and I had to write it...reading it makes me wish i hadnt weird...oh well will let you be the judge.(Is fictional) [bodytext] => Bleeding Sorrows

In my heart my tears bleed,
Emotional release I need,
I my hands my love lingers,
Slowly draining through my fingers,
I can not hold on to you anymore,
Let god giude you to heavens door,
Find peace my love for I have none,
Why couldnt I save you and my son?
I cannot live without you two in my life,
Words written in blood from my own knife.

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Sorrows tears bleed

Contributed by Sapphire_Blue on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:49:02 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Bleeding Sorrows

In my heart my tears bleed,
Emotional release I need,
I my hands my love lingers,
Slowly draining through my fingers,
I can not hold on to you anymore,
Let god giude you to heavens door,
Find peace my love for I have none,
Why couldnt I save you and my son?
I cannot live without you two in my life,
Words written in blood from my own knife.

By Sapphire_Blue

Copyright © Sapphire_Blue ... [ 2004-12-16 07:49:02]
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Re: Sorrows tears bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:49:38 AM AEST
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short and deep, a very good write,
pixie xx

Re: Sorrows tears bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:44:11 AM AEST
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Short,
but very deep in amotion,
GREAT WRITE!

*~givingin~*

Re: Sorrows tears bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:44:28 AM AEST
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Short,
but very deep in emotion,
GREAT WRITE!

*~givingin~*

Re: Sorrows tears bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by hot-shot on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:01:20 AM AEST
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nice one!!!...
hot-shot

Re: Sorrows tears bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:50:58 PM AEST
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short and yet sooo powerful.......excellent job....i loved it....awesome poem

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: Sorrows tears bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 08:20:20 AM AEST
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Great write deep and powerful message within.
GOOD JOB.

P.S Thank for the comment on my poem.
To understand it's message read my poem
I HAVE AIDS.

~DENNIS~

Re: Sorrows tears bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 11:40:43 PM AEST
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Love it. The flow of it is awesome.

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